The take's over, the break's over(Force apps)
Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2017 8:51 pm
The snow was deep, the air was dry. As Neive's aggressor landed on a large hill on the ice world of illum, a sense of the unknown loomed.
the ship's back opened and Neive stepped out, an extra black robe shielding him from the brutal weather as he looked over the area. The planet looked dead, a barren wasteland in the outer rim. However, Neive knew there was so much more.
The clone wars... Neive had been almost a fanatic about them, and this place held a crucial detail: The attack of a massive jedi temple by the separatists. Neive had heard about this event while scouring some of the jedi's archives about what had happened on Hypori. The battle between a Jedi master and a horde of seperatist bombing droids, and two jedi who were almost buried inside their own temple... Neive was going to see this temple for himself. Perhaps it had been rebuilt, he said to himself. That the jedi might have brought it back to its original glory. However, once he reached the temple... it was a terrible truth that lie in front of him.
The temple had been abandoned. Rubble was scattered throughout the temple. However, the temple was still navigable. Neive entered the large temple and thought about what could have brought such a great temple to its knees like this. It was appalling. The destruction... but it wasn't from the CIS. Something else had brought this desolation, but... what?
Neive explored the temple, walking around aimlessly for a while. Soon, he came upon a large room with a dome roof, a cavern making up the walls and ceiling. In it.... lightsaber crystals. Crystals scattered throughout the walls. Neive looked in amazement, before slowly... the colors faded. The room became almost grey, a dark resonance around the room, in the walls, everywhere... And Neive was alone, in the middle of it all. The room became almost nonexistent, no entrance or exits. Neive looked around the room as voices crawled into his head.
"Neive, you fool! You do not belong here! Why have you betrayed family?! Your heritage! You are nothing without it! Without us!"
"Neive, why do you stray? Come back to us, we will show you the way..."
"They killed us... and now you forgive them? We are your blood, and you would rather take the high road than avenge us!"
"Avenge us! Avenge us!"
"Destroy them! Take your revenge! You hate them! You want them all dead! You know you do!"
Neive held his head and fell to his knees as the choir of voices flooded his head, until they all faded, leaving one male voice.
"neive... You know this is not the way. You are better than this. You can stop your suffering. But to do this, you must kill those who cause it."
Neive shook his head, slowly standing. "No... I can't! I cannot fight in anger! I will not take revenge!" The man's voice said again. "You must. The dark side is too strong in you for you to let it go so easily."
(Begin force app, force level up.)
(Requirement: 400 words)
(Begin)
Neive looked forward, the anger bottling up inside him. His blood boiled, and the midichlorians in it began speeding up, almost absorbing the force as Neive stepped forward. This voice... it would not deceive him. He was going to destroy it. He was going to get rid of these thoughts. Neive curled up and quickly shot his body out, a blue sphere pushing out as he yelled out. The walls of the room burst open, and again he found himself in utter darkness.
A light ahead... what was this, he wondered... was this the exit he had hoped for? Neive walked towards the light, until he exited the cavern that he had been inside.
Grass. A field, nothing around but a few buildings in the distance. Up above, a huge ship, a sphere with a ship around it. Fighters fought all around, however... some were uninhabited. Droid fighters. This was definitely of a long past. However, his thought was interrupted by the burning of a huge fire, Neive stepping back as it surrounded him, only one way for him to go: Back into the cavern. He stepped back and fell back into the darkness, Closing his eyes until he landed softly on the floor of a large room. He looked up, just in time to see a jedi, stabbed in the torso by a red, double bladed saber. Neive stood and grabbed the hilts of his blades, before noticing: Lightsabers... interesting. Neive looked back as another jedi ran forward out of a hallway, only for the sith to toss him into an elevator shaft. Neive ran forward, before the man turned to him, and Neive stopped dead in his tracks. Those horns, the design of his skin...
Darth Maul.
Neive stepped back as Maul spoke. "Neive... it is time. You must show me that you are loyal to your family. that's what is important to you, is it not? Family..." Neive was frozen. But after a moment, he realized he couldn't fight his blood.
He dropped to his knees, Maul smiling. "Good. Wait here for me." Maul looked back as the jedi hung on by a small ledge in the shaft. Maul smiled and plunged his saber down, the man falling. That was what sent Neive off the edge.
With a piercing yell, neive let out all his anger, all his hate and his fury, Into one movement. Soon, electricity shot out from his palm, Maul knocked back with such impetus into the wall behind him that the metal bent. Neive kept this going for a moment, before letting go and balling up his fist again, sending another round of electricity at Maul, the wall giving way and sending Maul out of the building, falling to the ground so far below. Neive looked at the gaping hole where his brother once stood, and fell to his knees, shaking his head. "No... brother... I can't..."
Again, Neive was plunged into darkness.
(End force app, force level up)
(Required words: 400)
(Words: 461)
"Neive... it's alright. Do not blame yourself. It is the empire that destroyed your blood. You want revenge... do you not?"
Neive replied, "Yes... I want revenge."
"Then it is time... Confront them. Destroy them."
Neive sighed, "No. I won't give in to the dark side... I want revenge. But I will not take it."
Maul's voice became angered. "You will, Neive. It is the only reason you became a user of the force! You must destroy the empire! They destroyed your home, killed your family!"
Neive yelled out. "No! I will not fight in anger! I will not take revenge!!!"
Maul sighed. "Fine... if you want to take the path of the jedi... so be it."
Maul left Neive, alone in the veil of darkness.
the ship's back opened and Neive stepped out, an extra black robe shielding him from the brutal weather as he looked over the area. The planet looked dead, a barren wasteland in the outer rim. However, Neive knew there was so much more.
The clone wars... Neive had been almost a fanatic about them, and this place held a crucial detail: The attack of a massive jedi temple by the separatists. Neive had heard about this event while scouring some of the jedi's archives about what had happened on Hypori. The battle between a Jedi master and a horde of seperatist bombing droids, and two jedi who were almost buried inside their own temple... Neive was going to see this temple for himself. Perhaps it had been rebuilt, he said to himself. That the jedi might have brought it back to its original glory. However, once he reached the temple... it was a terrible truth that lie in front of him.
The temple had been abandoned. Rubble was scattered throughout the temple. However, the temple was still navigable. Neive entered the large temple and thought about what could have brought such a great temple to its knees like this. It was appalling. The destruction... but it wasn't from the CIS. Something else had brought this desolation, but... what?
Neive explored the temple, walking around aimlessly for a while. Soon, he came upon a large room with a dome roof, a cavern making up the walls and ceiling. In it.... lightsaber crystals. Crystals scattered throughout the walls. Neive looked in amazement, before slowly... the colors faded. The room became almost grey, a dark resonance around the room, in the walls, everywhere... And Neive was alone, in the middle of it all. The room became almost nonexistent, no entrance or exits. Neive looked around the room as voices crawled into his head.
"Neive, you fool! You do not belong here! Why have you betrayed family?! Your heritage! You are nothing without it! Without us!"
"Neive, why do you stray? Come back to us, we will show you the way..."
"They killed us... and now you forgive them? We are your blood, and you would rather take the high road than avenge us!"
"Avenge us! Avenge us!"
"Destroy them! Take your revenge! You hate them! You want them all dead! You know you do!"
Neive held his head and fell to his knees as the choir of voices flooded his head, until they all faded, leaving one male voice.
"neive... You know this is not the way. You are better than this. You can stop your suffering. But to do this, you must kill those who cause it."
Neive shook his head, slowly standing. "No... I can't! I cannot fight in anger! I will not take revenge!" The man's voice said again. "You must. The dark side is too strong in you for you to let it go so easily."
(Begin force app, force level up.)
(Requirement: 400 words)
(Begin)
Neive looked forward, the anger bottling up inside him. His blood boiled, and the midichlorians in it began speeding up, almost absorbing the force as Neive stepped forward. This voice... it would not deceive him. He was going to destroy it. He was going to get rid of these thoughts. Neive curled up and quickly shot his body out, a blue sphere pushing out as he yelled out. The walls of the room burst open, and again he found himself in utter darkness.
A light ahead... what was this, he wondered... was this the exit he had hoped for? Neive walked towards the light, until he exited the cavern that he had been inside.
Grass. A field, nothing around but a few buildings in the distance. Up above, a huge ship, a sphere with a ship around it. Fighters fought all around, however... some were uninhabited. Droid fighters. This was definitely of a long past. However, his thought was interrupted by the burning of a huge fire, Neive stepping back as it surrounded him, only one way for him to go: Back into the cavern. He stepped back and fell back into the darkness, Closing his eyes until he landed softly on the floor of a large room. He looked up, just in time to see a jedi, stabbed in the torso by a red, double bladed saber. Neive stood and grabbed the hilts of his blades, before noticing: Lightsabers... interesting. Neive looked back as another jedi ran forward out of a hallway, only for the sith to toss him into an elevator shaft. Neive ran forward, before the man turned to him, and Neive stopped dead in his tracks. Those horns, the design of his skin...
Darth Maul.
Neive stepped back as Maul spoke. "Neive... it is time. You must show me that you are loyal to your family. that's what is important to you, is it not? Family..." Neive was frozen. But after a moment, he realized he couldn't fight his blood.
He dropped to his knees, Maul smiling. "Good. Wait here for me." Maul looked back as the jedi hung on by a small ledge in the shaft. Maul smiled and plunged his saber down, the man falling. That was what sent Neive off the edge.
With a piercing yell, neive let out all his anger, all his hate and his fury, Into one movement. Soon, electricity shot out from his palm, Maul knocked back with such impetus into the wall behind him that the metal bent. Neive kept this going for a moment, before letting go and balling up his fist again, sending another round of electricity at Maul, the wall giving way and sending Maul out of the building, falling to the ground so far below. Neive looked at the gaping hole where his brother once stood, and fell to his knees, shaking his head. "No... brother... I can't..."
Again, Neive was plunged into darkness.
(End force app, force level up)
(Required words: 400)
(Words: 461)
"Neive... it's alright. Do not blame yourself. It is the empire that destroyed your blood. You want revenge... do you not?"
Neive replied, "Yes... I want revenge."
"Then it is time... Confront them. Destroy them."
Neive sighed, "No. I won't give in to the dark side... I want revenge. But I will not take it."
Maul's voice became angered. "You will, Neive. It is the only reason you became a user of the force! You must destroy the empire! They destroyed your home, killed your family!"
Neive yelled out. "No! I will not fight in anger! I will not take revenge!!!"
Maul sighed. "Fine... if you want to take the path of the jedi... so be it."
Maul left Neive, alone in the veil of darkness.