A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Tue Feb 28, 2023 8:39 am

Force Adhere
600-1,700 words
With a swift kick to the remains of the wrecked speeder bike embedded in the rippled dust to his side, the leaking core of an engine sputtered as it quite frankly prayed to him for death. The rattle was unmistakable. He extended his left palm, parallel to the ground. Static filled the air as the machine lurched upward to meet him, only a rough four feet above its former final resting place. An… unnaturally strong cylindrical grip tightened around the sole intact handle. He forced the tip of the bike forward and to his starboard, aiming it as precisely as he could. His eyes fluttered and vision waned. Perhaps it was the result of the physical trauma he had endured, the dark power coursing through his veins in potencies not meant for one so young, the glare from the reemerging suns blazing from behind the scattering storm clouds, or simply the dust once again kicking up with the rumble of the begrudgingly reverberating engine.

The toe of his boot rose, swiped through the dust and sparked the bottom of the engine. Without a moment to process, the machine ruptured, all its energy hemorrhaging down with enough force to reach his target three times over. Or so he thought. His vice grip did not lessen as the trajectory he was on began to slow and platteau. He wasn’t going to make it in time.

He moved to raise his left hand, to reach out to the looming ship that was about to be launched into lower orbit. Only his hand brought with it the machine he was riding, via the remaining handle. This of course came at the cost of counteracting his flightpath, changing the direction of the dying thrusters and marooning him further from his target. He tried to shake the handle off in a panic. No avail. In a desperate gambit the boy swing it around a few times clockwise, his own body twirling, building an angular momentum even as his altitude began to lower. In a final bid, he thrusted his arm forward, bike still attached. Partly from kicking the engine a final time, and partially from calling upon the Force to fling this lifeboat toward the ship ahead of him, he was once again on course.

Reaching forward with his right palm, his left still glued to the handle, the hot rumble of the hull was less welcoming than he had anticipated.

With that, the ship was jettisoned, leaving Axl clutching to a notch in the hull with his battered and shredded fingers.

Axl gripped the hull of the ship, knuckles beyond bone white– he could have sworn they were as translucent as his skin and they housed what truly resided within him at a cellular level. Pools, tiny nebulae of black and red vortexes surging, giving birth to greater darkness expanded and receded in waves beneath his cellophane flesh. It was a manifestation of the darkness he had invited into himself, become a conduit to. Feeding on the dark side of the Force had ensured his survival, to be sure, but sucked him further into an undertow leading him into an uncharted sea, all alone beneath the relentless crests.

He couldn’t describe the force with which his hands had adhered to the hull and the speeder bike handle, respectively. They were instinctive, emotional responses. Emotional response he found were strengthening, gaining confidence with the visualization of grabbing onto and never letting go of Domi and Erailic, clutching them and keeping them close through all adversity. Axl’s connection to the Force had always been strengthened or at least better coped with when he connected phenomena to his emotional states and metaphors. It was fitting that at a time all he wanted in the world was to cling to his girlfriend, the very ability his and his family’s lives depended on was to cling to what was in front of him.

His eyes narrowed as he surveyed the crashing ship hurtling towards the ground. The teenage sith knew he had to act fast if he wanted him and his to survive the impact. With a deep breath, he closed his eyes and focused his mind, calling upon the power of the Force.

In an instant, Axl felt a surge of energy flow through his body, and he willed his arms and legs to adhere to the metal hull of the ship. The sensation was uncanny at first, like his limbs were being pulled in every direction at once. The space between his atoms were vanishing and he was in essence fusing with the ship. It was not merely the soles of his boots or tips of his fingers. His entire being was stiffening in one sense, which struck all the odder as his body still flailed side to side. His entire body, though able to bend and flow with the rapidly shifting air pressure and rumble beneath him was seemingly magnetically reinforced. His boots to the hull and his feet to his boots, certainly, but also his feet to the hull. He felt himself as an extension of the ship.

The feeling somehow quickly normalized and became second nature, as things tended to in emergency. He began to climb up the surface of the ship. Each step, one leg felt demagnetized just enough to take a step before clutching back to the course, rickety surface beneath him. It was clunky and clumsy, like learning to walk after suffering a stroke.

As he made his way toward the top of the cockpit, Axl could feel the intense heat and vibrations emanating from the engines. He gritted his teeth and concentrated even harder, using the Force to steady his movements and keep his grip on the ship.

Finally, Axl reached the top of the ship and looked out over the landscape rushing towards him. With a fierce determination, he used the Force to guide the ship's descent, using his body as an anchor to slow its descent and ease it to the ground.

Suddenly an engine burst, a piece of the hull detached and flew by his head. The entire ship lurched and veered to port. A sixth sense in him also blared. His right arm flung forward as if on its own and clutched something familiar. It was Domi’s slender, reassuring hand, trembling in his. CLAMP. The air between their palms vanished, their fingers wrapped around one another like vines. They were fused.

Relief predated the knowledge of the complication that necessitated it.

A bright spot in his mind awakened, speaking to him not with words but pleading all the same. It begged him to be a hero, to save lives, but in a way that made his heart murmur as the blood continued to rush over it with the velocity of the ship while the organ was left hundreds of feet behind him. This was some facet of the light side forcing its way into him, urgently imploring him to follow its path. It in no uncertain terms adjured him to let go. To allow his entire world to come crashing down around him. Domi. Erailic. Sten. Vasilisa. Himself. They were all to be sacrificed. His literal and metaphorical hold on them and their descending, crumbling vehicle ran counter to some grand design– some path of least resistance that would avert countless deaths and more grisly fates to all involved. Let go.

Let go. The light side of the Force had the audacity to demand of him the only ones who mattered. Let go. After being absent of him his entire life. Let go. Now? Let go. NOW? It had remained cowardly and silent, judging from the periphery whilst he had slaughtered countless sentient beings. Let go. It stood by as he filled his body with darkness, and now it whispered for him to let go. Let go.

His index finger went limp. Domi locked eyes on his. Her brown, soulful orbs searched him for some reassurance they were going to survive. He couldn’t. His pinky became flaccid. Then his thumb. Two fingers, even with their supernatural bond were not enough to hold onto her any longer. It was impossible hear any words in those conditions, each breath carried away at a raging speed in their descent. And yet, Axl hear her soul and felt her words reverberate through their two remaining connected digits.

“You’ll be okay, love.”

The world stopped. The raging gusts were no more. There was her, him, and that moment.
How dare that sanctimonious prick of the Force try to rob the galaxy of its greatest gift, its brightest point. In that moment he know he would never let go. He was going to be there, holding her hand as she revolutionized worlds.

Sensation surged back into each finger, and he reeled her in tight, not just their hands but their entire bodies melding together and becoming one flesh.

The horizon line was the only thing in sight, the characters on signs were fully legible. They braced for impact that would have rendered the entire triumph meaningless.

Axl gauged the fulcrum of the ship crudely before using every ounce of the dark side he could muster to slam down on the nose of the ship.

If there was actual sound, his ears elected not to register it. As the ship buckled upon itself, its rear came up and over. Axl finally released the grip his legs had on the hull. The ship’s change in trajectory remained separate from their own inert path. They miraculously and effortlessly passed through the hole made just behind the cockpit. They skidded along the interior and Axl recommitted to his party trick, adhering to the floor with both legs and one hand, with Domi’s in the other. He had to trust that Erailic was still safely strapped away. They had no time to search before contact with the planet’s surface.

They stared knowingly into one another’s eyes, accepting oblivion so long as it was bound together.

If he had been missing out on the earlier earthshattering kaboom, here it was, and then some…

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Tue Feb 28, 2023 11:00 pm

Psychometry
More than 300, less than 1,585
Hours passed.
The suns were setting on his periphery.
The crash site had been far off on the horizon where no settlers were likely to discover it until well after the next dawn.


Axl and Domi had set up a camp, using the wreckage as the base for the shelter. Erailic had fractured their left leg and Domi was tending to them. She had tapped into her tendency to traditionally wrap wounds, and use the Force to heal them anyway, undercover. It wasn’t the worst way to cover tracks, considering those days the Empire would have eliminated anyone they suspected of having Jedi powers– unspeakably worse to be an unsanctioned sith coven headed by two rogue Imperial agents on the run and their genetically interesting if not significant offspring.

Domi had set mines around the campsite to ward off raiders, predatory beasts, and warn her of any approaching danger. Axl grumbled, hoping it wouldn’t literally and figuratively blow up in his own face. Erailic stayed with her, hopefully able to get rest.


Axl knew that if the mob boss had given the order for his men to kill the three kids, he had had to have caught Sten and Vasilisa in a trap. Clearly the blubberous man had been successful. Had he failed, he’d have been dead, and the pair would have found their way back in the midst of the earlier turmoil. Whether the intent had been to kill the pair of sith, enslave them, or auction them off to any number of interested parties, Axl could not be certain. But regardless, it was not ideal.

He thumbed a small, singed satchel at his back. Early in their meeting, when the boy had insulted the mob boss, he had broken of a knob from a railing the man had touched. It was in fact a small facsimile of the man himself, a further sign of his vanity, emblematic of the core of himself. Axl had intended to snatch it, where if anything had gone wrong, he could ram it down the corpuscled crime lord’s throat, and if everything had gone smoothly, present it to Domi as a gag gift that evening. Things were certainly shaping up to necessitate the former.

Axl thumbed the statue through the satchel, closing his eyes and concentrating. Flashes assaulted his senses like a violent drumbeat. It was nonsensical, merely dim colors and textures, completely abstracted from any true image. He sighed, realizing he would need to approach this in earnest, where he had hoped to achieve his goal more passively and keep, for himself, an image of a determined man on the hunt who did not have the patience for waiting or effort for caring. An illusion of sauveness, to be certain.

He peeled back the folded fabric, palmed, then produced the piece.

Axl’s glare ensnared the tiny statue, his eyes fixed on the small, round man standing on its pedestal. He reached out his opposite index finger, resting it on the cool stone surface. As he closed his eyes, he felt a rush of energy flow through him, the power of the Force guiding him towards the secrets the statue held.

He could sense the presence of Tiln, the mobster he had only met that morning. The man was fat, with a bloated face and a small, beady pair of black eyes that were far too moist for a dusty planet and that seemed to dart around whenever he was nervous. Axl had been tasked by the circumstances with finding out everything he could about Tiln, and he knew that this statue held the key.

As he delved deeper into the statue's secrets, he could feel the weight of Tiln's past bearing down on him. He saw glimpses of the man's childhood, a time when he had been poor and neglected, forced to fend for himself on the streets. He saw Tiln's first foray into crime, a desperate attempt to make money and survive in a world that had never given him a fair shake.

Nothing that would help Axl in the moment.

He needed to glean a hint as two the second location he had spirited off to with Axl’s parents. Some conversation, some thought. He had to pierce deeper through the veil of what was.

The statue began to glow with a faint aura, as Axl tapped deeper into the essence of psychometry. This ability allowed him to sense the history of an object, and the emotions and intentions of its owner. He closed his eyes and focused his mind, reaching out with his senses to see if he could detect any trace of Tiln's physical presence within the statue.

Slowly, the image of Tiln began to materialize in Axl's mind. He saw the mobster sitting in his plush office chair, smoking a cigar and laughing with his goons. Axl could sense the greed and cruelty emanating from Tiln, like a foul cloud of putrid stench that clung to everything he touched.

But as Axl dug deeper, he saw something else in Tiln's past - a glimmer of hope, a chance for redemption. He saw the moment when Tiln had met his partner, a kind and loving woman who had shown him that there was more to life than crime and violence. He saw the way that she had helped him turn his life around, and how he had vowed to leave the criminal world behind for good.

But even as Axl watched, he saw that Tiln's redemption had been short-lived. He saw the moment when Tiln had been tempted back into the criminal underworld, lured by the promise of power and wealth. He saw the way that his wife had tried to stop him, pleading with him to remember the life they had built together. But Tiln had been blinded by greed, and had turned his back on everything he had ever held dear.

Axl felt a surge of smug understanding as he watched Tiln's story unfold. This was a man who had been given a chance at redemption, and had thrown it all away for a handful of coins. Typical story that it was, it was a diversion for what Axl needed to discover in the moment. Even as he felt his frustration rising, he knew that he could not let it cloud his judgment. He needed to remain focused, to stay in control.

It was not enough to simply know Tiln's thoughts and feelings. Axl needed to track the man's movements, to know where he was at all times. He focused his mind once more, willing the statue to reveal its secrets to him.

As he delved deeper into the power of psychometry, Axl felt his consciousness expanding, reaching out across the nearby settlements like a vast net. He could feel the pulse of the ghost towns, company stores, and saloons, the ebb and flow of the remaining life that surrounded him after the earlier slaughter. And within that flow, he could sense Tiln's presence, like a black hole that drew everything around it into its orbit.

Axl opened his eyes and gazed down at the statue, which had now begun to vibrate with an intensity that matched the pounding of his own heart. He knew that he had tapped into something powerful, something that could help him turn the tables on Tiln and take control of the situation.

But then the memories shifted, and Axl saw his parents' eyes as they were overpowered and taken by Tiln's men armed with ysalamiri and disruptor rifles. They employed knockout gas, all wearing filtration masks. He saw himself, wielding a lightsaber, fighting back against the attackers. He saw Tiln lurking in the shadows, his bulbous form barely visible in the darkness. This was shifting away from mere psychometry, blurring with foresight.

Axl's anger surged within him, fueled by the knowledge of his parents' capture and his own near-death experience. He focused his energy on the statue, willing it to reveal more information to him.

The images came faster now, more intense than before. He saw Tiln's hideout, a dank and musty basement in the heart of the city. He saw his parents, tied up and scared, but still alive. And he saw Tiln himself, a bloated and sweaty figure. His hideous was overtaking Axl’s mind’s eye entirely, and–

No.

He knew that any power that verged on foresight came with a price. The more he used the Force, the more it demanded of him. He could feel the weight of his own mortality pressing down upon him, the awareness that every moment he spent tapping into the power of the universe was a moment closer to his own inevitable end.

Axl took a deep breath, centering himself in the present moment. He knew that he couldn't let the power distract him from the there and then, that he had to find a way to use it without becoming its slave. With one last glance at the statue, he turned and headed out to another settlement, ready to track Tiln down and bring him to justice.

Axl had followed the visions and ventured the few miles back in the direction from which he’d come, but found himself in another settlement. Skulking in the outskirts, in the deep embrace of shadows, he’d overheard mercenaries talking about how they hadn’t heard from their counterparts in the next town. Axl’s handiwork. He smugly grinned as campfire danced on the mercenary’s faces while only lengthening the shadows on his own.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Fri Mar 24, 2023 7:35 am

Drain Knowledge
700-1500 words
He waited for the short one to walk away with a crude line about draining his bladder. He took the opportunity to ambush the tall one. The… exceptionally tall one.

Axl stood before the towering Wookiee mercenary, his eyes ablaze with the power of the Dark Side. With a flick of his wrist, he unleashed a torrent of malevolent energy that flowed through the air and invaded the alien's mind. The Wookiee struggled and roared in protest, but Axl was relentless. He delved perpetually deeper into the mercenary's thoughts, searching for any information that could lead him to his kidnapped parents.

Axl called upon the Dark Side of the Force to drain the knowledge of a Wookiee mercenary, against his considerable, otherwise unflappable will.

Draining Knowledge was not merely a method of eavesdropping. Practitioners were no mere voyeurs. Its precision and destructive nature varied practitioner to practitioner, but instead of baiting a hook and catching a fish, it was more akin to feeding a fish a reel of razor wire, yanking it back with great force, and studying the remains closely for the parts one needed.

Axl stood by the, by then, shivering, helpless Wookiee, his hand outstretched and crackling with dark energy. He had learned this technique from his mother, a former Imperial Inquisitor, who had taught him to drain the knowledge of others through the Force. Axl had always found it easy to use his abilities for his own gain, and he felt no remorse for what he was about to do.

As he began to drain the Wookiee's memories, Axl felt the sheer volume of information overwhelm him. It was a jumble of abstract experiences and emotions, all tinged by his current bewildered terror and agony. The Wookiee's experiences and knowledge were too different from his own, too alien. Axl struggled to make sense of the flood of memories, feeling frustrated and angry at his own inability to extract the information he needed.

The Wookiee's eyes rolled back into his head as Axl continued to draw out his memories. Axl was relentless, pushing harder and harder until he felt a sharp pain in his own mind. The Wookiee's thoughts had become too jumbled and chaotic, and Axl had pushed himself too far.
But the Wookiee's memories were too alien, too muffled for Axl to decipher. He withdrew from the mercenary's mind, panting and sweating from the effort. He knew he needed a different approach, one that would yield more tangible results.
He released the Wookiee from his grasp and stepped back, breathing heavily.

The goliath collapsed like a steamed vegetable to the dust beneath him, inaudibly whimpering as clumps of soiled hair clung along the inside of his damp lips.

Realizing that the Wookiee was too much of an enigma, Axl turned his attention to a four-armed Ardennian. He delved deep into the alien's mind, watching the man's life and career unfold before his eyes. Axl saw how the Ardennian came to work for the notorious mob boss Tiln, and how his skills as an enforcer had earned him the respect of his peers. Axl also discovered in a general understanding that the Ardennian had been involved in the kidnapping of Axl's parents, and he felt a sense of righteous anger rising up within him. However, the alien's memories were still fragmented, and Axl struggled to piece together the clues he needed.

As he continued to drain the alien's memories, Axl saw the man's life play out before him like a holographic projection.

Orri Garkeh's life was far from typical for his species. Born and raised on the planet Ardennia, he grew up as a cook in his family's modest restaurant, serving up dishes that were both delicious and exotic. But Orri was restless, and he yearned for a life of adventure and excitement. So, when he came of age, he left his home planet and joined up with a band of mercenaries, using his six prehensile limbs and natural Ardennian agility to great effect.

At first, Orri loved the thrill of the job, taking on all manner of dangerous missions and earning a reputation as a skilled and fearsome fighter. But he also longed for love and companionship, and one day, he met a beautiful human woman named Selene. They fell deeply in love, but their relationship was short-lived, as Selene could not bear the thought of being with a mercenary.

Heartbroken, Orri eventually fell to spice smuggling to ease the pain. He quickly rose through the ranks of the spice trade, becoming the co-head of a respected mid-size running operation. But his newfound wealth and power came at a cost. He became increasingly ruthless, willing to do whatever it took to protect his business and his profits.

Eventually, Orri's reputation caught the attention of Tiln, a rotund gangster who was looking for new muscle to help him expand his criminal empire on the planet Bar Neth. Orri saw an opportunity to make even more money and accepted Tiln's offer, becoming one of his most trusted enforcers.

Orri's days were now spent carrying out Tiln's orders, from collecting debts to eliminating rivals. He reveled in the power and control he had over others, but he also knew that this life would not last forever. He yearned for something more, something that would give his life meaning beyond the endless cycle of violence and greed.

One day, Orri received a message from Selene, the woman he had once loved. She was in trouble, and she needed his help. Despite the danger it posed to his position with Tiln, Orri could not resist the chance to see Selene again and perhaps make amends for their past.

Unlike the mirrored situation Fett had gleaned from Tiln’s experiences in life, crime, love, and loss, Orri actually had a chance to turn things around.


He planned to leave Bar Neth in two days and venture into the heart of the galaxy’s core worlds, determined to find Selene and help her in any way he could. But his journey was not without its challenges, and he found himself victim to trepidation, battling not only his own inner demons but also a host of imagined dangers and enemies.

Through it all, Orri planned to remain steadfast in his quest, knowing that he could never go back to the life he had led before. For better or for worse, he needed to become a better man, and this would be his chance.

Axl once again saw how the Ardennian had been recruited by Tiln, and how he had risen through the ranks to become one of the boss's most trusted lieutenants. Axl relived the man's triumphs and failures, his joys and sorrows. He felt a strange sense of connection to the Ardennian, and found himself admiring the man's loyalty and resilience.

But even as he sifted through the Ardennian's memories, Axl felt a growing sense of unease. He knew that what he was doing to Orri was far more invasive than cycling through an album or replaying video. He was extracting information, rather violently, no matter how he was experiencing the data. It was not a guarantee that memory would be irrevocably scrambled, but the possibility was significant. He could have been leaving this man with a jigsaw puzzle between his ears, one with missing pieces. He felt a twinge of guilt as he extracted the information he needed, knowing that he had violated the Ardennian's privacy and autonomy.

And yet.

He still needed the very data he had initially set out to find. His parents’ whereabouts and last known status. Given this Orri’s proximity to Tiln, he no doubt still had fruit to bear.

Axl laid into him again, his focus like a lens refracting light into a laser.

Despite his misgivings, Axl bore deeper into the Ardennian's memories, searching for the only information that mattered. And finally, he found what he was looking for.

He saw Tiln's lair, deep underground, hidden from prying eyes. He saw his parents, Vasilisa and Sten, shackled and unconscious, at Tiln's mercy. And he saw Tiln himself, a hulking, rotund figure with a cruel grin on his face. The Gangster, he saw from Orri’s own perspective, had been in the room as Axl’s parents were depowered by ysalamiri and dosed with gas. They had been prodded with electricity and fashioned with shock collars for good measure. The ysalamiri were then boxed up and removed from the scene, a baffling turn of events. Why would Tiln willingly give up protection from the Fetts retaliating with Force attacks when they awoke? Was he that pompous? That naive? Was there more to this man than it first appeared?

Axl pushed deeper into the Ardennian's mind, extracting more pointed, related information. The lair was kilometers away, accessed by an… abandoned infrastructure tunnel.

He saw the Ardennian's memories of the underground tunnels and the secrets hidden within. The information was valuable, but Axl knew he needed more.

The security panel required an authorized hand print. Axl could have indeed carried Orri’s limply convulsing and groaning body to the access point and pressed his digits gingerly to the screen, but there was no telling if any other security points would require continued clearance.

“Well, seeing as you have so many spares…”

He made his way to the entrance, leaving behind a husk of a man, short one hand and any semblance of his plans to reclaim his life and love. For what it was worth, Axl didn’t wish him any further ill will.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Sat Oct 21, 2023 8:40 am

Combat Sense
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The old lift Axl entered creaked as it began its descent. Every sound and movement seemed to echo his rising anxiety. With each drop, he felt more removed from the surface and the thought of never seeing Domi again became more intense.

The dim lights in the lift flickered, providing an uneven rhythm to his thoughts. The unpredictability of the lights mirrored his own uncertain emotions. Each downward jolt was a reminder of his fading hope; each pause, a reflection of his wavering heart.

His descent into the cavern was less a journey physically downward although it was literally that, but even more a submersion into the very depths of Axl's psyche. Every creak of its struggling tracks and every whir of its unoiled gears resonated within the cavernous chambers of his heart.

As the lift began its descent, the dim and erratic luminescence from the overhead bulbs provided a staccato rhythm to his thoughts. The lurching of the aged contraption, its jarring motions at odds with the steady progression of time, mirrored the tumultuous emotions surging within him. Each downward jerk was a visceral reminder of the precipitous decline of hope; each hesitation of the lift's movement, a stark parallel to the faltering beats of his own heart.

Domi's visage, ethereal in its beauty and ensconced within the cloister of his memory, was the beacon that had always guided him through the murkier terrains of his existence. Now, as the world above grew distant and the abyss below beckoned, the stark realization that he might never gaze upon her countenance again threatened to shatter the fragile dam holding back the torrents of his despair.

With every level the lift descended, the space seemed to compress around him, as if the very earth sought to suffocate his resolve. The lights, those flickering sentinels of his journey, began to falter in their duty. Their sporadic failures, moments of engulfing darkness between spasms of illumination, were emblematic of the vacillating hope within Axl. Just as he'd clung to a fragment of optimism, it'd be shrouded by an allconsuming dread, plunging him once again into the void of desolation.

The failing lights, sputtering and dying, paralleled the dwindling embers of hope within him. Each extinguished bulb was a testament to a memory lost, a moment with Domi that he feared he'd never relive. Their sporadic reignition, albeit fleeting, was a cruel mimicry of the capriciousness of hope, teasing him with its warmth only to leave him in cold despondency once more.

His hands gripped the railings with whiteknuckled intensity, each shudder of the lift amplifying the tempest of emotions roiling within. The echoes of Domi's laughter, the tender caress of her fingers, and the intoxicating depths of her gaze were instead specters of a world that felt increasingly distant, separated not merely by layers of rock and soil but by the weight of impending doom.

Were he to ever lose her, as his seance with the light side had urged him to accept, he would intrinsically lose— No. It wasn’t the time. His parents were the priority, and the trail he’d gleaned was fading.

By the time the lift reached bedrock, the lights had all but abandoned their task, leaving Axl in near-complete darkness. But it wasn’t the tangible obscurity that terrified him—it was the overwhelming eclipse of his own spirit. The gnawing void, the looming dread that he might never traverse the vast chasm that now separated him from his beloved Domi, threatened to consume him whole.

In that abyss, the tangible darkness of the underground was a mere reflection of the shadow that threatened to eclipse his very soul. The lift's journey, a descent into both the bowels of the planet’s dusty surface and the depths of his despair, ended with a jolt; but for Axl, the true odyssey—through the labyrinthine corridors of fear, longing, and anguish—had only just begun.

The lift locked into place and the gargantuan service door before him rushed open, flooding him with freshly processed air and blinding luminescence.

Although his physical sight had yet to recover, Axl knew at an instant he was audience to a platoon of Tiln’s personal security. Droids and mercenaries lined the halls, their weapons trained on a singular target.

His entrance, a synchronized symphony of malevolence and purpose, scarcely disrupted the sterile ambiance of the tunnel, yet it belied the tempest that was to come.

His twin crimson lightsabers, mere extensions of his will, crackled into existence, casting an eerie luminescence upon the mechanized guardians and mortal sentinels that stood in stalwart defiance. Their posture, emblematic of resolute duty, bore no hesitation, no inkling of the impending decimation.

Axl reached out through the stillness before the first blast, to the living Force, calling upon lessons Vasilisa had instilled. A near precognitive sensory analysis of incoming attacks and maneuvers, an extension of what Sten had taught him from even the earliest of ages without the aid of the supernatural. His father had insisted on honing Axl’s ability and awareness to predict each move of his opponent based on probability, telegraphed motion, and strategy. For most of his life he had attuned himself to use his natural senses and observation to survive scrape after scrape. But where he was formidable for his age and station, his mother saw a knight with gaps in his armor, with vulnerabilities measured in milliseconds. What may have served him against the odd wannabe bounty hunter left him potential victim to a machine programmed to respond more rapidly than any humanoid synapses. Or worse yet, against one who was fully equipped with the aid of the Force. While the skill certainly overlapped with other abilities and instinctual application, tapping into it fully was a potentially life or death proposition and was not to be assumed.

Axl’s eyes, aflame with the magma filled reflections of his sabers, surveyed the tableau of his adversaries: Droids, those soulless enforcers of order, stood interspersed with mortal guards, all steadfastly locked onto the intruder with weaponry aimed and lethal commands to be executed.

With a mere thought, an imperceptible exertion of his formidable will, Axl unleashed his telekinetic prowess upon the first wave of droids. They were hurled with a killer dispassion against the cold, unyielding walls of the bunker. The sound - an amalgamation of crushing metal and electronic death cries - served as a dissonant overture to the macabre ballet that ensued.
For the guards, mortal and imbued with an inherent cognizance of impending demise, fear momentarily flickered within their gaze. But discipline, forged within the crucible of militaristic indoctrination, overrode their trepidation. They unleashed a salvo of blaster fire, a radiant cascade of impending obliteration hurtling toward Axl.

In a display of preternatural acumen, he deflected the incandescent bolts with calculated precision, each reflection a harbinger of doom as it found purchase within the flesh of the assailants. Their falls, bodies scorched by their own weaponry, served the tragic irony of their demise.

The remaining guards, undeterred by the fates of their fallen brethren, advanced. The droids, less impacted by the visceral tableau of death, recalibrated, their targeting systems locking onto the Sith with mechanical indifference.

Axl, now enveloped within a maelstrom of both orchestrated violence and calculated serenity, engaged his adversaries with a lethality that was both exacting and balletic. His lightsabers, those elegant instruments of demise, danced with a malevolent grace, carving through droid and human alike with an indiscriminate fervor.

The dark side flowed through him, a tempest that fueled his physicality and sharpened his senses. With each strike, he was both the conductor and the instrument, crafting a symphony where each note was a crescendo into oblivion for his adversaries.
His telekinesis, unbound, cascaded throughout the chamber. Droids were dismantled with an unspoken command; guards were suspended, their final moments a helpless descent into the abyss as they were inexorably crushed by an unseen force. It was a manifestation of wrath both visceral and ethereal, a testament to the paradoxical beauty and brutality of the dark side.
As the final guard crumpled to the cold, unfeeling ground, and the last droid sparked its mechanical death throes, Axl, amidst the remnants of his foes, stood solitary, yet far from alone. The echoes of his actions resonated within the hollow expanses of the bunker and the dark recesses of his own being.

Droids and punks were one matter. What lurked ahead, unseen was another. Predicting its attacks were to prove on a steeper learning curve.

Axl was greeted from the shadows and found himself confronted by a figure not unexpected, but certainly transformed. Tiln stood, towering over the boy. The notorious gangster known for his rotund appearance and malevolent dealings, stood with an arrogance to match his stature. But the darkness that radiated from him suggested he was no ordinary foe.

Axl's keen eyes narrowed as he watched the portly figure take a slow step forward, and with an almost whimsical gesture, Tiln unveiled from beneath his voluminous cloak, a lightsaber. Its blade ignited with a searing ruby light, casting sharp incandescent contrasts over his corpulent form. It was then that the realization truly settled in and hit Axl like a freighter at hyperspeed – Tiln was not just a mere criminal; he was a dark Jedi, a wielder of the Force twisted to his own whim.

The cavern echoed with the hum of their growling sabers, Axl's twin crimson blades just shy of blending with Tiln's solitary ruby one. The very air seemed to vibrate with the force of their wills, both Sith and Dark Jedi assessing each other, searching for vulnerabilities.
Axl’s breath hitched in the midst of a particularly perilous entanglement, his mind churning tumultuously as he desperately sought the foresight that once had served him so unerringly. His utilization of the Force, earlier a cascade of clarity and premonition, now offered mere ephemeral glimpses into Tiln’s intentions. Flashes of movements— a sweep here, a stab there— flickered tantalizingly at the edges of his consciousness, but they were fractured, disjointed, as if seen through a shattered mirror.

As their battle commenced, it birthed a maelstrom of flashing blades and swirling energies. Sparks flew with each clash, illuminating the cavern with ephemeral bursts of light. Tiln, an orb of malevolence and cunning, wielded his weapon with an unpredictability that was paradoxically calculated.

Axl, drawing from the depths of the dark side, sought to predict Tiln's movements, using the Force to glimpse into the immediate future. But each time he tried, Tiln's strikes became more unpredictable, his style a chaotic dance that defied anticipation. The very currents of the Force seemed muddied, obfuscated by Tiln's unique connection to it.

His strikes were layered with feints and misdirections, each motion intending to cloak his true intentions beneath a veneer of apparent vulnerability. His saber twirled and his body, against seemingly physical logic, moved with a surprising nimbleness that belied his bulky form.
The gelatinous goliath exploited Axl’s wandering thoughts to strike with not just his anticipated saber, but with his leg, slamming down expertly upon the boy’s knee. His stance buckled and his center of gravity shifted with such a torrent he was unable to reconcile his footing. Biting his lip through the succulent pain, Axl used the momentum to roll, narrowly avoiding the next two swipes before again rising to the balls of his feet.

Axl, recognizing the direness of his situation, cloistered his mind, summoning the darkness within to quench the flames of panic and doubt. Within the silent recesses of his introspection, he sought to attune himself more acutely to the nebulous glimpses offered by the Force. His focus intensified, every sense homing in on Tiln’s energetic fluctuations, the subtle shifts of his muscular tensions, and the malicious gleam that heralded his strikes.

As their blades collided once more, something within Axl clicked. A flash of insight, clearer and more cohesive than before, illuminated his mind. Tiln’s next move, a deceptively casual sideward sweep aimed at his torso, was perceptible before it was executed. Axl’s body, almost autonomously, reacted— sidestepping the lethal arc with a fluidity that belied his internal turmoil.

His heart hammered in his chest, the shadow of his own mortality haunting his steps. Yet, with every clash, every near-miss, the fragments of foresight began coalescing into a more decipherable tapestry. Axl, his focus becoming a tangible entity within the ether of battle, was now predicting with a resonating accuracy, moving with a prescient assurance that mirrored his heightened prowess.

Tiln’s brow furrowed, an insidious suspicion darkening his features. He attacked with renewed ferocity, his blade whirling in a vortex of impending doom. But Axl, his inner eye now open, foresaw the strikes with a sharpened clarity, parrying and evading with an almost nonchalant ease.

A moment crystallized within the chaos— Tiln, overextended in a particularly aggressive lunge, was exposed, the future movements broadcasted in lucid detail across Axl’s perception. He acted, his lightsaber scything through the air with a precision sculpted by the foreseeing clarity the Force now provided.

With an echoing cry, Tiln’s hand, still clutching the hilt of his weapon, separated from his wrist, spiraling away in a macabre dance as his lightsaber extinguished. The resonance of the battle, once punctuated by the hum and clash of sabers, now reverberated with his howls of anguish and the thud of his severed limb upon the scorched floor beneath.

In the pulsating aftermath, Axl stood victorious yet not triumphant, gazing down upon his vanquished adversary with a countenance that was an amalgam of resolve and an enigmatic sorrow. The future, once shrouded in the unknown, had unfolded according to his vision, yet the victory was saturated with an inexplicable melancholy that permeated his being as profoundly as the darkness to which he was eternally bound.

“Mediocre,” the words crept out of his mouth and lingered on his crooked lip.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Mon Oct 30, 2023 8:32 pm

Affliction
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Amidst the oppressive ambience of the bunker, Axl towered over the now handless Tiln, his own breathing labored, a complex tapestry of rage and purpose evident in the depths of his eyes. He reached out, grasping Tiln’s face with a hand that exuded his dominion. The physical contact was but a conduit, a bridge upon which Axl intended to channel the insidious energies of the dark side. He began summoning a power that was whispered about in hushed tones among Sith and Jedi alike— a force induced venom, dark and potent.
As Axl stood, the ambient energy around him began to palpably shift. A weight settled in the air, the atmosphere thickening with the burgeoning power he was summoning. He delved deep into the recesses of his mind, seeking that forbidden corner where the dark side whispered its insidious promises. With a focused intention, he beckoned it forth, willing the shadows to coalesce into a tangible, malicious entity.

The first sensation was one of coldness, a biting chill that seemed to emanate from his very core. It spread outward, causing his skin to break out in goosebumps, his breath to cloud in front of him. Then came the pressure, like an invisible hand squeezing his core, each pulse pushing against a tightening grip.

As the shadows obeyed his command, converging and compressing, a murky poison took form. It felt thick and viscous, almost tangible, as if he were trying to mold clay with his sheer will. But unlike clay, this substance pulsated with destructive intent, its very essence radiating an even darker purpose than his own.

A symphony of whispers, too many components to discern, filled his ears, each voice more seductive and malevolent than the last. They promised the ability to reshape the universe to his desires. But with that promise came a cost. Doubts that he'd never acknowledged now came to the forefront, fears he'd long buried resurfaced, traumas he'd locked away were now on full vivid display.

As it formed, the toxin became a reflection of all the darkest parts of him. Every regret, every unkind thought, and every… suppressed desire found a home within it. That was the essence of the dark side; it was a mirror to the soul's most hidden nooks.
The physical strain was clear. Veins stood out on Axl's forehead, his face contorted in a foreign invader, an imposter. Sweat beaded on his skin, the droplets glinting like tiny diamonds in the dim light. His breathing grew ragged, each exhale increasingly labored. His limbs trembled, not from fear, but from the sheer force of maintaining control over something so volatile.

Despite the strain, Axl felt a perverse sense of exhilaration. This was raw power, unbridled and untamed. It was dangerous, yes, but also intoxicating.


HIS PREY
The moment the darkness touched Tiln’s lips, it felt chillingly cold, a stark contrast to the burning sensation which chased it. It slithered, almost like a sentient being, seeking entry through the slight parting of his mouth. As it entered, the sensation was reminiscent of a snake, slick and silent, finding its way into a secluded den.

Once inside, he felt it split and diverge, making its way down his throat and into the very core of his being. Every nerve ending it touched seemed to scream in silent agony, a testimony to the potency of this concentrated dark side of the force. It was as if a malevolent presence had taken root within him, every inch it covered turning into a wasteland of hope and light.

Tiln’s eyes, previously filled with anguish from the loss of his hand, now widened in a horrifying realization. Axl’s fingers became dark tendrils of malevolence, as the dark side manifested itself into an onyx poison, insidiously weaving its way into Tiln’s very essence. The sensation initially was like a thousand pinpricks, a tingling that quickly crescendoed into excruciating burning. The venom was not merely content in scalding the flesh; it sought the very marrow of one's being, targeting both the corporeal and the ethereal.

The darkness wormed its way into his veins, acting as a poison that tainted the very life force flowing within. Askajians possessed two hearts pounding in their chest, and Tiln's echoed in discordant arhythmic time. The first, that once robust organ, struggled to pump the corrupted blood, causing an erratic, rushed rhythmic pounding in his ears. Every beat was a reminder of the encroaching darkness, the ticking clock of his fading vitality.

His vision began to blur, the world around him taking on a shadowy hue. Colors drained away, replaced by varying shades of black and gray. Voices seemed distant, as if he was hearing them from underwater.

Memories, once vivid and bright even if depraved, were now tainted. Moments of joy and love were overshadowed by anger, jealousy, and resentment. Every positive emotion was consumed, replaced with its darker counterpart. Trust turned into suspicion, love into obsession, and hope into despair. The world, as he knew it, was unraveling, replaced by a twisted version where the dark side reigned supreme.

Beneath Axl's unyielding grip, Tiln’s skin began to ripen and rot, the visible capillaries darkening as the sinister corruption spread, charting a path of devastation. It slithered deeper, touching upon the neural pathways, disrupting synapses and distorting neurotransmissions. Tiln’s responses, once swift and precise, became languid and uncertain. Each breath he drew was shallow, labored, as if the very act of living had become a Sisyphean task.

His cognitive functions, too, were ensnared in the venom's cruel embrace. Thoughts that once flowed as a cascading river now became a stagnant pool, muddied and indistinct. Memories, both treasured and reviled, blurred into an incomprehensible haze. The force, that once boundless reservoir of energy and power, became distant, a mere whisper lost in the cacophony of his own deteriorating consciousness.
But as it continued its malevolent journey, seeking to consume him fully, there was a part of him that resisted. A tiny spark, buried deep within, that refused to be extinguished. He struggled in turn, illuminating the recesses and providing a respite from the overwhelming darkness.

The invading entity, sensing this pathetic rebellion, doubled down. Ten thousand needles were pricking him from within, each one releasing more of the potent gunk into his system.
He writhed in agony. All his sins and misdeeds were rendered child's play. Indistinct guttural pleas hung on his arid lips, not just the aftermath of torture, but from the realization of what he had become. His own darkness had promised him power, wealth, and survival, but at what cost?

And as the last vestiges of his consciousness were being swallowed by the abyss, he made one desperate plea. A plea to the force, to the universe, to anyone who might be listening, to save him from this fate.


AXL
Yet, as Axl reveled in the efficacy of his malefic weapon, an unforeseen consequence began to manifest. The dark tendrils, which had coursed so effortlessly into Tiln, now began to betray their master. They crept with a sinister intent up Axl’s arm, the initial sensation chillingly familiar—a tingling that promised a crescendo into pain. Panic, a sentiment foreign and uninvited, began to claw at Axl’s composure.
The darkness, like a noxious contagion, continued its relentless march, inching past his wrist, licking at the sinews of his forearm. With each passing second, Axl felt a numbing cold interspersed with bursts of fiery agony. The very instrument of Tiln’s torment was now becoming Axl's own crucible of suffering.

A tangible weight was pressing down on his chest, making each breath more laborious than the last. The murkiness snaked its way through his veins, a stark contrast to the warmth of the blood yet to be corrupted. It felt as if his very life force was being suffocated, replaced by this dark, noxious substance. Every pulse sent waves of icy discomfort, and his skin took on a chalky hue. Had he been free to analyze his experience, he would have remarked on how the supernatural venom burned Tiln yet froze Axl. Could this have been a transference of heat? Was the darkness literally feeding from the lad's essence to overtake his foe?

As the dark side’s poison continued to amass within him, Axl's muscles twitched involuntarily, and his vision tunneled. The world around him became hazy, with only the object of his focus and enmity remaining in sharp contrast.
The Sith antihero's mind became a battleground of its own. The instinct for self-preservation screamed at him to release Tiln, to sever the conduit through which the corruption flowed. Yet, another, more sinister voice whispered of the tantalizing opportunity at hand, urging him to push further, to wholly obliterate Tiln, even at the peril of his own essence.

As the venom continued its dual path of annihilation, a pivotal moment of reckoning approached. The weight of his decision, the balance between vengeance and self-preservation, pressed upon Axl with a gravity that threatened to crush his very spirit.
In a fervent surge of will, Axl withdrew, tearing his hand away from Tiln’s face, breaking the sinister connection. Both combatants, master and victim of the venom, were left gasping, their energies depleted, their souls scarred.
Tiln, the once menacing Dark Jedi, layed prostrate, a mere shadow of his former self, the venom's aftermath evident in his ashen countenance and the feeble rise and fall of his chest. Axl, though triumphant, bore his own burdens—his arm marred by the creeping corruption, a stark reminder of the price of wielding such malevolent power.

In the aftermath, the bunker echoed with their shared pain, a testament to the perils of delving too deep into the seductive allure of the dark side as well as its everlasting promise for more, provided one was willing to pay its ransom.

Now, the boy turned his attention to finding and releasing his captive parents.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Tue Jan 30, 2024 10:01 am

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In the cramped confines of the stolen secondhand starship, its interior dimly lit by faltering lights, Axl and his companions, each bearing the physical and emotional damage of the last several hours, secured themselves into their seats. The vessel, an… shall we say “unloved relic” of more ornate times, creaked and groaned under its newfound and unexpected burden. The air was thick, punctuated by the hum of the ship's already strained engines and the intermittent flicker wrapping around its elongated and opulent design features.

The uneven light also haunted those boarding, casting ghostly shadows across their faces. Domi, her arm bandaged crudely, winced with every jolt of the ship. Erailic, valiantly masked their discomfort, a thin line of blood trickling from a cut above their eye. Vasilisa, her expression ever stoic yet eyes betraying a hint of concern, checked her recovered saber hilt for what seemed like the hundredth time. Sten, the most severely injured apart from his eldest son, grimaced as he applied pressure to his side, a makeshift dressing barely containing the wound.

His weathered whisper broke the silence. "We need to leave Bar Neth. Head for home in Hutt Space, Nar Shaddaa. Regroup where we have the best footing."

“The Hydian Way to Malastare,” Vasilisa coldly countered, “Wince is there, she owes us a patch job and a hole to hide in after last time.”

“You lot sort this out while Dom and I see if this pleasure cruiser is even going to get us to upper atmo,” Axl shed a loose plate of armor as the pain from his dislocated shoulder reminded him of its presence. With his opposite hand he ushered Domi toward the bow of the ship.

The pair took their seats in the cockpit, bracing themselves for whatever complication would plague them next. Domi fingered the dials and levers with a deftness that had never been lost on or ignored by Axl. She was a natural. Those hands were capable of the most delicate things, be it art or precision work with a blade– but also in convincing technology to love her and cave to her will as much as anyone with a heart would. The cockpit whirred to life and its signature warmth accentuated the curve of her self-impressed grin.

As the ship ascended, it cut through the lingering smoke and dust of their recent rampage—a maelstrom both intentional and… less so that Axl had wrought upon those who had dared to step between him and his family. Outside the cockpit window was a swirling tapestry of destruction and retribution, a physical manifestation of the tumultuous path he had blazed. As well as the carcass of The Morrow Wind, billowing and bellowing below.

The ship groaned and rattled in its ascent, its frame protesting against the turbulence. Axl, his hands steady on the controls despite the tumult, navigated through the chaos with an almost preternatural calm. Beside him, Domi's gaze was fixed on the horizon, her expression a blend of determination and apprehension.

Through the racket of their ascent, amidst the violent jostling of everything surrounding them, their hands found one another. It was a fleeting moment of connection, a silent promise amidst the storm. Their fingers intertwined, a small island of calm in the raging sea of uncertainty. In that brief touch, they shared every unspoken word.

The ship pierced the final layer of clouds, breaking into the upper atmosphere. The violence of the upward trek gave way to the serene vastness of space, the infinite expanse a stark contrast to the bedlam they had left behind. The stars, distant and unjudging, greeted them with the cold indifference of the cosmos. It was a moment that commanded a breath, a pause in the relentless march of events, a respite from the gravity of the planet and of their situation.

It didn't last. Axl and Domi shared a long, knowing glance, an unspoken acknowledgment of the road ahead and the choices they had made. Without a word, they rose from their seats, the weight of responsibility settling back upon their shoulders as they left the cockpit to consult with the others.

Vasilisa, ever the strategist, her face etched with lines of worry, was convinced that their actions had not gone unnoticed. "Tiln has associates," she said, her voice a low but urgent murmur. "They'll be arriving soon. They will be armed–"

“Unlike their friend,” Axl cut her off and immediately shifted the tone of the proceedings. “Let's make sure we're elsewhere before that becomes relevant.”

He paused long enough that his tongue flapped several measures between his lips as he considered.

“I know of a place. About as far away as you can physically get from here. Thick jungles, few humans. Not a hotspot for the Empire. Going that far off the grid, though…” he glanced face to face to face. Precisely one of them knew what he had in mind.

Vasilisa’s gaze met Axl’s, a silent exchange of understanding passing between them. They were the matriarch and the heir, their decisions borne out of a fierce desire to protect their kin. Vasilisa nodded, a subtle yet definitive gesture. “Varonat,” she agreed, her voice echoing a mix of resignation and trepidation. “It’s certainly not any of our first five hundred choices, and that works to our advantage.”

Sten lacked the energy to again effectively protest his preferred route home to Nar Shaddaa in Hutt Space, where they could be assured they knew every way in and out of familiar nooks and crannies in the Vertical City.

Domi, pragmatically chiming in to execute the plan and get as much distance behind them as possible offered, “Why not cut straight through the core worlds? If we aren't interested in making any stops back home or to pick up supplies, that's the fastest route.”

Axl nodded. Pragmatism won. Pragmatism and that pensive pout she formed when she was singularly determined.

Upon returning to the cockpit, Axl took a labored breath. The adrenaline and dark energy that had fueled him on the adventure had run its course, and was now replaced by the indescribable pain, stiffness, emotional dissociation, and anesthetized senses.

Outside, the stars shone indifferently against the vast tapestry of space, each a witness to the countless stories unfolding beneath them. Inside, under the flickering lights, the family faced a crossroads and all paths could lead to disaster. “Disaster,” he drifted in thought, “literally ill-starred, ill-fated.”

He flicked a dial, and… Nothing. He rocked it to and fro. Nada. He side eyed Domi to clock if she had noticed. She had. Her hands overlapped his, trying to rectify his false start of booting up the hyperspace astronav system.

In finding a new ship they hadn't spent any of their 10 minutes concerning themselves with something they so frequently had taken for granted.

A few more flips and palm slams, and there was… a response.

Something began to sizzle and smoke, and they were both fairly certain it was the very same navi computer. A few sputters more and the gravity set in.

Axl's fingers danced over the navigational console with a deftness born of desperation. The route from Bar Neth to Varonat, a path fraught with as much uncertainty as it was with hope, now lay obscured by the acrid smoke rising from the ship's fried navigational computer. He prodded and pried, his actions a chaotic blend of pretend technical expertise and blind hope, but the console remained unresponsive, its screens a tableau of static and darkness.

His brow furrowed in frustration as he confronted the grim reality: the navigational system was beyond repair, its circuits irreparably damaged. A harsh, bitter laugh escaped his lips, a sound devoid of humor and filled with self-derision. The irony of their situation was not lost on him: a ship capable of traversing the stars, now rendered directionless, its path as uncertain as theirs.

The weight of the predicament pressed heavily upon Axl. Without a functioning navigational system, they were blind in the vast ocean of space. The possibilities whirled in his mind, each more harrowing than the last. Becoming lost in the endless expanse, adrift without hope of salvation. Or worse, miscalculating a jump and crashing into some forgotten moon, obliterating not only himself but his entire family—the thought was unacceptable.

Amidst the turmoil of his thoughts, a whisper crept into his consciousness, a murmuring at the edge of perception. The Force, an ever-present entity, spoke to him in hushed tones, its words a siren song of guidance and temptation. But Axl recoiled from its call, a mix of fear and shame clouding his judgment. He remembered, with a shiver, what it had asked of him earlier, the demands that had left him questioning the very nature of his power.

He would never again entertain the idea that the Force could ask of him to sacrifice or needlessly endanger his love for some ill defined sick greater narrative design. A power that could demand that, that would presume his complicity, that was a power that would not take hold.


He turned back to the console, his hands moving aimlessly over the dead screens. The others, unaware of his inner conflict, looked to him with a mixture of trust and expectation. Axl felt the weight of their gazes like a physical burden, a reminder of the responsibility he bore for their lives.

The ship, a silent witness to his struggle, drifted aimlessly, its course uncharted, its destination unknown. Axl glared into the abyss of space, the stars a distant tapestry of light and shadow. The future, once a path to be chosen, was now a labyrinth with no calculable exit.

“We have no droids,” Axl spoke through the corner of his mouth, “and judging from both of our reactions, I'll guess neither of us have the confidence or tools to fix this.”

Domi nodded, “we can't risk the core worlds. Even if we could make some repairs to the circuits we couldn't trust those readings.”

Truly, if trying to navigate the rim without reliable nav was suicide, through the core would be mass genocide.

“But if we do this is a few segmented jumps and have fate conspire to prevent us being obliterated by some dwarf moon,” Axl couldn't believe he was entertaining the idea, “we don't know if the hyperdrive itself or even the life support systems are in any better shape than the nav. We could be marooned in wild space. I'll be damned if in the best case scenario I lose you to pirates.”

A blank expression swept across Domi's face. Something unspoken in that moment left them both without breath. Some universal truth on an unknown plane of existence, dancing around them.

She rebounded, reluctantly. A moment. Then, “we can do this. You and me. Reach out.”

His hand made its way to the nip of her neck, gently.

“Not like that, flyboy.”

He gave a halfhearted wink.

“At least not until we make it to Varonat,” she offered warmly and cheekily.

They closed their eyes and drew that stale artificially recycled oxygen deep into their chest through their stinging nostrils.

Axl disappeared into his own mindscape. He saw stars stretching out before him in an expanse his eyes would never have permitted.

Axl stood at the threshold of perception, where reality blurred into the realm of the Force. His eyes, closed to the physical world, opened to the ethereal landscapes that the Force unveiled. There, in the solitude of his own mind, he began to conjure the image of Varonat, a distant planet whispered about in the corners of the galaxy, untouched and untamed.

The visualization process was like weaving a tapestry from strands of thought and feeling. With each thread of the Force he pulled, the image of Varonat grew more vivid. He saw its dense jungles teeming with unseen life, the canopy a vibrant emerald and jade interspersed with bursts of exotic colors from flora unknown to most of the galaxy. He could almost hear the cacophony of sounds, the distant cries of creatures, and the rustling of leaves in the wind. Varonat pulsed with life, a rhythm that was both alien and inviting.

But it wasn't enough. He could feel the world, but not with the certainty and clarity to FIND the path to it. He needed a better model to follow to gain perspective.

Much like his father's lessons to him about gravity being a matter of objects longing to be together, he felt the pull of this jungle haven, but didn't fully know how to navigate that attraction and make it actionable, no matter how willing the Force was to facilitate the journey once he had his confidence and bearings.

He considered. Another analogous time and place arrested his mind.

Domi, Domi, Dom–

The memory proved vivid and unbidden, surfacing from the depths of his consciousness at the beck and call of the Force itself. It was a recollection steeped in desperation and longing, a moment when the force had been his only guide through the abyss of uncertainty and separation —a moment when the Force had been his only guide to find Domi. They had been separated, each flung into different corners of chaos, and the void her absence created was palpable, a chasm that echoed with the raw need to be reunited.

He remembered the overwhelming sense of loss, the void left by Domi's absence. She was more than just a companion; she was the north star in his tumultuous sky, a beacon of direction and meaning. In his mind's eye, she was a vivid oasis in the barren desert of his existence, the singular point of vibrant color in a world turned monochrome by her absence.

Driven by a need that transcended physical space, Axl had reached out with the force, allowing it to flood his senses. It was more than just a search; it was a yearning, a call to the universe to reunite what was meant to be whole. His thoughts, his essence, extended beyond the confines of his body, seeking her.

In this state, he visualized Domi as his destination, not merely a location but a sanctuary, the culmination of every journey he had ever embarked upon. She was the embodiment of every dreamt paradise, the epitome of peace and belonging that he sought in the galaxy. He did not just see her; he felt her presence, as tangible and vital as the air he breathed.

In the pulsating heart of a crowded city, Axl found himself adrift, a lone figure swept along by a tide of bodies and voices. The force, his ever-present ally, was a tumultuous sea within him, its waves crashing against the shores of his consciousness. He sought Domi, his soul's counterpart, through their quantum entanglement, a connection that was both his compass and curse.

The streets teemed with life, a cacophony of colors, sounds, and smells that assaulted the senses. Axl's focus, however, was singular. Driven by a need that transcended physical space, Axl had reached out with the force, allowing it to flood his senses. His thoughts, his essence, extended beyond the confines of his body, seeking her. He could feel her presence, a beacon in the fog of his mind, but the path to her was obscured.

With each step, Axl's frustration grew. The force, usually so clear and guiding, now seemed to mock him with its ambiguity. The entanglement, a bond that should have led him to her, was a tangle of possibilities, each more confounding than the last.

As he navigated the throng, the force ebbed and flowed, a tide that pulled him first in one direction, then another. He took a turn down a narrow alley, certain it was the right path, only to find himself at a dead end, the walls a silent testament to his failure.

Retracing his steps, Axl emerged back onto the bustling street, his senses stretched to their limit. It was then that he saw them - a battalion of Imperial Stormtroopers, their white armor a stark contrast against the drab surroundings. Among them, unmistakable in his black armor, was a Purge Trooper, an ominous harbinger of death for any force-sensitive being.

Axl's heart skipped a beat. The presence of the troopers was a clear and present danger, not just to him but to his family. If the Purge Trooper alerted the Inquisitors, it would mean certain death. His entanglement to Domi, all-consuming as it was, had blinded him to the world around him, a world fraught with peril.

In that moment, survival instincts took over. Axl ducked behind a nearby food cart, its vendor oblivious to the drama unfolding. He crouched low, his breath shallow, as the troopers passed by, mere meters from his hiding place. The Purge Trooper paused, his helmeted head turning slightly as if sensing something amiss. Axl held his breath, his heart pounding in his ears.

The seconds stretched into an eternity, each one a lifetime of fear and anticipation. Then, as suddenly as he had stopped, the Purge Trooper moved on, the battalion continuing their march, unaware of the near miss.

Axl remained hidden for a few moments longer, gathering his composure. His attempt to find Domi through the force had failed, leading him not to her but to danger. The realization was a bitter pill to swallow, a reminder of the limitations of even his considerable powers.
With a deep breath, Axl emerged from his hiding place, his resolve hardened. He would use his wits, his knowledge of the city, and every other skill at his disposal. The force, for all its power, was not the only tool in his arsenal.

And so, Axl melted back into the crowd, just another face in the sea of many.

This path was not marked by coordinates or directions, but by a pull that he felt deep in his core—a gravitational force that drew him inexorably towards her. He navigated not by sight, but by a profound sense of belonging, an unerring knowledge that each step brought him closer to where he belonged.

As he followed this path, the space around him seemed to warp and bend, the laws of physics yielding to the indomitable will of the Force. Distances that should have taken hours to traverse were crossed in moments, obstacles that should have impeded him were swept aside as if they were mere illusions.

With each step, the path between them became more defined, fault lines in space that only he could perceive. They were lines drawn by destiny, a roadmap etched by their shared fate.

And then, suddenly, there she was. Domi, a vision amidst the chaos, her presence a balm to the storm that raged within him. The moment their eyes met, it was as if the universe had realigned, the fragmented pieces falling into place with a resounding click. In that instant, Axl knew that no matter the distance, no matter the obstacles, the Force would always guide him back to her. They were two souls, entwined by fate and bound by a power that transcended the physical realm—a connection that was as eternal as the stars themselves.

This quantum entanglement between them, an unbreakable bond that defied the laws of physics– it was key. Distance was a mere concept, irrelevant in the face of defined, certain connection.


Varonat, Varonat, Varo–

His palm caressed the hyperdrive lever, biding its time.

As he delved deeper, Axl felt an inexplicable connection form between himself and the distant world. It was as if the planet's essence had reached across the vastness of space, entwining with his own. This quantum entanglement, a concept so abstract yet palpably real within the Force, bridged the undefined space between them. Varonat was no longer a mere destination; it was an extension of himself, a place that resonated with the same frequency as his soul. His physical form responded to the invisible currents that now linked him to Varonat. It was as if the planet itself called to him, its voice a siren song that resonated with the very core of his being. Within this trance-like state, a path began to form, a trail forged by instinct and destiny. It was a route that only he could sense, a path that existed beyond the realm of charts and coordinates.

Axl's body swayed gently, guided by an instinctual path that began to form. It was a surreal experience, feeling a planet's pull, its gravitational and spiritual allure drawing him in. He could sense the paths that wound through its jungles, the streams that cut across its terrain, and the peaks that scraped its skies. The Force flowed like water, finding the path of least resistance, guiding him to this uncharted world.
The more he focused, the stronger the connection became. It was as if he was standing on the precipice of two worlds, one foot in the physical realm aboard the ship, and the other treading the lush grounds of Varonat. The sensation was disorienting yet exhilarating, a testament to the boundless power of the Force.

In this heightened state, Axl began to understand Varonat in ways that maps and scanners could never reveal. He felt the ebb and flow of life on the planet, the natural cycles that governed its existence. He sensed the subtle shifts in its biosphere, the delicate balance that sustained it. The planet, in its secluded corner of the galaxy, was a living entity, its heartbeat a faint drum in the cosmic orchestra.

As he gradually retracted his consciousness, pulling back the tendrils of thought and sensation that had stretched across the stars, Axl was left with an imprint of Varonat etched into his being. The connection remained a faint line drawn in the fabric of space, a tether that he could follow when the time came.

But it was more than a visual spectacle; Axl felt Varonat. He felt its pulse, a rhythmic, vibrant life force that coursed through the planet's veins. It was an energetic resonance that spoke of a world untamed, a world that thrived in the chaos of natural order. Their connection was ethereal yet palpable, a bridge constructed not of steel or stone, but of energy and consciousness.

With each passing moment, the path grew clearer, more defined. It wound through the cosmos, a silken thread that beckoned him forward. Axl felt as if he was being pulled, not unwillingly, toward Varonat. The planet, once a mere destination, now felt like a part of him, as vital as a limb or an organ.

As the vision gradually receded, Axl was left with a profound sense of purpose. Varonat was no longer just a refuge; it was a calling, a piece of a larger puzzle that he was destined to solve. The Force had not just shown him the way; it had revealed a part of his destiny he would spend decades trying to unravel.

His confidence rose, the image of Varonat etched into his mind, its presence a constant, pulsating echo.

Axl reached out with his senses, letting the Force envelop him. It was like stepping into a river, feeling the current tug at him, guiding him in its inexorable flow. He surrendered to it, allowing it to carry him along its winding path. In his mind's eye, the galaxy unfolded, a cosmic tapestry that he was now a part of.

He saw the fault lines, those unseen fractures in the fabric of space that would guide him on his journey. They were like glowing threads, weaving their way through the darkness, beckoning him to follow. With each decision, each adjustment of the ship's course, he felt the lines shift, guiding him ever closer to Varonat.

The journey was not without its hiccups and near hits. The Core Systems loomed like a maze of lights and gravity wells, a siren's call that threatened to draw him off course. But Axl steered clear, his path curving away from the well-trodden routes, into the uncharted reaches of Wild Space.

It was as if he were astral projecting, his consciousness floating free of his body, watching as celestial bodies passed him by. He saw nebulas, those great clouds of dust and gas, their colors vibrant against the blackness of space. He passed by rogue planets, untethered from any star, wandering the galaxy in lonely solitude. Each was a waypoint, a marker on his journey to the remote world.

As the ship hurtled through hyperspace, Axl felt a sense of unity with the universe. He was no longer just a traveler, but a part of the cosmic dance that played out across the galaxy. The Force was his guide, a constant presence that whispered secrets and showed him the way.
The fault lines in his vision began to converge, coalescing into a single, glowing path that led straight to Varonat. Axl opened his eyes, the starlines in the viewport stretching into the familiar streaks of hyperspace travel. He knew that they were close now, that their destination was just within reach.

The Force slammed into him like a brick wall, as he urgently pulled back on the lever controlling the hyperdrive. To say he had stopped on the edge of a credit, and a moment more would have spelled catastrophe would have been…

Quite an overdramatization. In fact, they came to a halt far more than a safe distance from their destination, and at normal speed, it would take another several hours to make their entry into its atmosphere. But they had made it.

Axl glanced at Domi beside him. In a surprise to no one, she had been on a similar journey as he had, helping to navigate beside him. Her hand had been resting on his the entire time, both having pulled back on the hyperdrive in tandem. What Axl hadn't yet realized was Vasilisa stood over his shoulder, also having been instrumental in mentally guiding the pair on the odyssey.


Amidst the silence of the cockpit, Axl, the bearer of a burdened destiny, felt a disturbance ripple through the Force, a premonition that sent a chill down his spine. The ship, a silent vessel hurtling through the vastness of space, became a crucible for the tumultuous thoughts that now plagued him. The Force, his constant guide, whispered a sinister truth, a warning shrouded in the metaphors of the cosmos.

As he had reached out to Varonat, forging a quantum entanglement with the distant planet, the Force had responded, a living entity that both nurtured and warned. It spoke to him of the inherent danger in such deep connections, the peril of two entities becoming irrevocably intertwined. The entanglement with Varonat was more than a navigational triumph; it was a mirror, reflecting the deeper, more personal bond he shared with Domi.

The Force, in its alleged wisdom, cautioned him. Such profound connections, while powerful, bore the seeds of potential tragedy. In the tapestry of the universe, threads that were too tightly woven risked unraveling, not just themselves, but the fabric around them. Axl’s bond with Domi, much like his connection to Varonat, was a double-edged sword, capable of guiding him to unseen heights or plunging him into unfathomable depths.

Axl pondered this revelation, his heart heavy with the weight of this newfound knowledge. His love for Domi, a beacon in the often murky waters of his existence, was now cast in a foreboding light. The Force showed him visions, echoes of potential futures where their entanglement led to ruin. In one, Domi was torn from him, a casualty of the cosmic forces they dared to defy. In another, it was he who brought destruction upon her, his own power the harbinger of her demise.

Axl grappled with the implications, his mind a battleground where love, duty, and destiny clashed. The Force, though a conduit of power, was also a conduit of truth, and its truths were not always kind. To love was to risk, to connect was to expose oneself to the potential for loss and sorrow.

Yet, in the depths of his soul, Axl knew that to sever these connections was to deny a part of himself. A part he refused to ever do without.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Fri May 31, 2024 7:57 am

Shadow Lance
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Axl, Age 19

Axl stood in the dim, echoing heart of the training grotto, the cool air whispering against his skin like a secret untold. The atmosphere was laden with a palpable stillness, punctuated only by the flicker of torches lining the stone walls. Shadows danced and flickered, creating a shifting tapestry of light and dark that seemed almost sentient, responding to the presence of those within the grotto.

His breath was steady, each inhalation deliberate, as if drawing in the very essence of the darkness that surrounded him. The familiar tendrils of the dark side began to stir within his core, a seductive and invigorating energy that coursed through his veins like liquid night. He could feel the allure of the shadows, their silent promise of power and potential calling to him.

“Like attracts like,” he calmly expelled the discount wisdom as he drew focus to the darkness swelling within himself, feeding it and establishing it as a gravity well, inviting its constituency from the world around him to join them in a dark baptism.

Axl extended his hands, palms outward, and with a subtle command of will, he summoned the shadows to him. The darkness responded eagerly, rippling and undulating across the floor like a living entity. Tendrils of shadow crept towards him, their movement sinuous and graceful, climbing up his legs and winding around his torso with a serpentine grace. The sensation was electrifying—a cold, almost silken touch that sent shivers of exhilaration down his spine.

As the shadows climbed higher, Axl felt them tighten and coil around his body, encasing him in an embrace of pure, concentrated power. The darkness enveloped him, each tendril a conduit of the dark side’s formidable energy. His senses sharpened, the ambient sounds of the grotto fading into a background murmur as he became acutely attuned to the force he was channeling.

He focused his mind, shaping the shadows with his intent. The darkness obeyed, drawn to his will with an almost magnetic attraction. The tendrils converged at his outstretched hands, thickening and solidifying into a tangible form. The process was intoxicating, the raw power of the dark side flooding his senses and heightening his awareness.

Axl opened his eyes to watch as the shadows coalesced into a slender, elongated shape. The lance began to materialize, defined not by the light it reflected, but by the absolute absence of it. It was a void, a singularity that seemed to absorb all light around it, casting an aura of impenetrable blackness.

The darkness wove itself around the lance, each tendril melding seamlessly into the weapon. Axl could feel the dark side’s power thrumming through it, a perfect extension of his will. The lance was sleek and elegant, its surface smooth and cold to the touch. It pulsed with an almost sentient energy, a testament to the mastery with which he wielded the shadows.

He grasped the lance firmly, reveling in the sensation of the darkness in his hands. The empowerment was palpable, a reminder of the control he exerted over the forces that once threatened to consume him. The shadows clung to him, their presence a constant, alluring reminder of the power he commanded.

Axl took a step forward, the lance moving with him as if it were an extension of his own body. The shadows around him seemed to ripple in response, drawn to the weapon like moths to a flame. The grotto was filled with the soft, almost inaudible hum of the dark side, a symphony of whispers that spoke of limitless potential and untapped power.

He twirled the lance, feeling the air part around it with a satisfying swish. The shadows followed its motion, trailing behind it like a dark comet. The weapon felt alive in his hands, a living embodiment of the darkness that lay within him. Each movement was fluid and precise, the lance an extension of his will and intent.

The process of creation had been as much a mental exercise as a physical one. Axl had drawn upon his deepest reserves of focus and control, channeling the raw energy of the dark side into a form that was both beautiful and deadly. The sensation of shaping the shadows had been intoxicating, a heady mix of empowerment and allure that left him craving more.

He could feel the dark side thrumming through the lance, a steady pulse of power that matched the rhythm of his own heartbeat. The shadows had become a part of him, their presence a constant, reassuring reminder of the strength he possessed. The weapon in his hands was a testament to his mastery, a symbol of the control he had over the darkness within him.

Axl took another step, the shadows around him parting like a living sea. The lance was a beacon of darkness, its presence a stark contrast to the flickering light of the torches. He felt invincible, the power of the dark side coursing through him like a river of liquid night. The shadows clung to him, their touch a cold, comforting embrace that spoke of endless potential and unyielding strength.

The shadows were not a force to be feared or shunned, but a source of immense power and potential. They were an extension of his will, a reflection of his inner strength and determination. The lance in his hands was a symbol of that power, a weapon that could cut through any obstacle and overcome any foe.

He raised the lance, feeling the darkness respond to his every thought and movement. The shadows seemed to dance around him, their presence a constant, alluring reminder of the power he wielded. Axl knew that he was capable of great things, that the darkness within him was a source of unparalleled strength and potential.

The sensation of the shadows was exhilarating, a cocktail of empowerment and allure that left him craving more. Axl felt the cold, almost liquid touch of the darkness against his skin, the tendrils wrapping around him like a protective cocoon. The shadows had become a part of him, their presence a constant, reassuring reminder of the strength he possessed.

The grotto was filled with the soft, almost inaudible hum of the dark side, a symphony of whispers that spoke of limitless potential and untapped power. Axl twirled the lance, feeling the air part around it with a satisfying swish. The shadows followed its motion, trailing behind it like a dark comet. The weapon felt alive in his hands, a living embodiment of the darkness that lay within him.

He had harnessed the mirror reflecting the dark recesses of his mind, shaping it into a weapon that was both beautiful and deadly. The shadows were not a force to be feared, but a source of immense power and potential. They were an extension of his will, a reflection of his inner strength and determination.

Axl felt invincible, the power of the dark side coursing through him like a river of liquid night. The shadows clung to him, their touch a cold, comforting embrace that spoke of endless potential and unyielding strength.

Lowering the lance, Axl allowed himself to bask in the sensation of the darkness. The shadows were his allies, his protectors, and his source of strength. He had harnessed their power, shaping it into a weapon that was a reflection of his own inner strength and determination.

Axl allowed himself a moment of silent contemplation, savoring the sensation of the shadows encasing his form and the empowering, heady thrill of the darkness coursing through him. With a final, steadying breath, he turned to face Domi, his eyes gleaming with an unspoken challenge. She stood poised and ready, a slender lance of pure, blinding light materializing in her hands, its luminescence stark against the pervasive gloom of the grotto.

Their eyes met, and an electric tension crackled between them. With a nod, Axl raised his lance of darkness, its surface absorbing every flicker of light around it, creating a void so profound it seemed to warp the space itself. Domi mirrored his motion, her lance radiating an intense, almost palpable glow that illuminated her features with an ethereal brilliance.

Without a word, they launched into their sparring session, a dance of light and shadow that transcended mere physicality. Axl’s first strike was swift and decisive, his lance slicing through the air with an almost predatory grace. Domi parried effortlessly, her light weapon meeting his dark one with a resonant clash that sent a shower of sparks cascading around them.

The two moved with tuned fluidity, their motions a seamless blend of attack and defense, each anticipating the other’s next move. Axl could feel the cold, insidious tendrils of his dark lance extending with every thrust and parry, the shadows licking hungrily at the edges of Domi’s luminous weapon. It was as if his lance was alive, a sentient extension of the darkness within him, seeking to consume the light before it.

Domi’s strikes were equally formidable, her lance of light cutting through the air with precision and grace. Each time their weapons collided, the grotto was momentarily illuminated, the radiant glow of her weapon battling against the encroaching darkness of his. The light seemed to pierce through the shadows, creating pockets of brilliance that shimmered and then were swallowed by the void.

As their spar intensified, Axl began to notice a curious phenomenon. The darkness of his lance seemed to be drawing the light from Domi’s weapon, absorbing its energy and causing it to flicker and fade. Conversely, the points where their weapons made contact left his lance scarred and melting, the solid darkness degrading under the assault of her pure, unwavering light.

The sight was mesmerizing, a visual symphony of light and dark, each vying for dominance. The darkness coiled and writhed, tendrils stretching out to ensnare the light, which in turn shimmered and pulsed with defiant intensity. The weapons were no longer mere tools of combat but living manifestations of the forces they represented.

Axl felt a surge of exhilaration as he pressed the attack, the darkness empowering him, heightening his senses and quickening his movements. He launched a series of rapid strikes, his lance a blur of shadow as he sought to overwhelm Domi’s defenses. She countered with equal ferocity, her light weapon slicing through the air with blinding speed, each strike a testament to her own formidable skill.

Their sparring became a whirlwind, light and dark intertwining in a chaotic dance. Axl could feel the push and pull of their energies, the shadows and light clashing and mingling in a display of raw power. The grotto was filled with the sounds of their battle, the hum of their weapons, and the rhythmic pounding of their hearts.

With each clash, the degradation of their weapons became more pronounced. The darkness of Axl’s lance began to wane, its edges fraying and dissolving where Domi’s light had touched. At the same time, her radiant lance flickered and dimmed, the energy being siphoned away by the hungry void of his weapon. It was a delicate balance, a symbiotic relationship that underscored the fundamental nature of their powers.

Axl relished the sensation of the shadows wrapping around him, their touch cold and electrifying. He could feel the coarse darkness coursing through his veins, a living force that responded to his every command. The lance in his hand pulsed with power, its surface a shifting, roiling mass of shadow that seemed to drink in the light around it.

As they exchanged strikes, Axl could feel the darkness surging through him, responding to his every command with eager intensity. The shadows wrapped tighter around his form, their touch cold and invigorating, enhancing his movements and sharpening his senses. The lance in his hands felt like an extension of his own being, a conduit through which he channeled the raw, untamed power of the dark side.

Domi’s presence was a constant, her light a beacon that guided their dance. Her strikes were fluid and precise, each movement a blend of grace and power. The brilliance of her lance was a stark contrast to the void of his, a testament to the balance they sought to achieve.

In a moment of clarity, Axl pushed forward, his lance driving towards Domi with relentless speed. She met his strike head-on, their weapons clashing in a burst of light and shadow. The impact sent a shockwave through the grotto, the darkness and light intertwining in a symphony of power.

The force of their collision was in the truest sense sublime, the shadows and light battling for supremacy. Axl could feel the darkness within him straining, the tendrils of shadow wrapping tighter around his core, feeding off the energy of the light. At the same time, Domi’s lance pulsed with radiant intensity, pushing back against the encroaching void.

As they continued to dance, Axl’s focus sharpened. He could sense the delicate balance between their weapons, the interplay of light and dark creating a dynamic equilibrium. The degradation of their lances became more pronounced, the darkness fraying and dissolving under the assault of the light, and the radiance flickering and dimming as it was drawn into the void.

Their movements became more fluid, their connection deepening with each exchange. Axl’s strikes were powerful and unrelenting, driven by the raw intensity of the darkness. Domi’s counters were equally formidable, her light a beacon of resilience and strength. Each clash was a testament to their skill and determination, a dance of opposites that underscored their unity.

In what he foolishly hoped to be a final, decisive moment, Axl channeled all his energy into a single, powerful thrust. His lance of darkness surged forward, a void that sought to consume everything in its path. Domi met his strike with equal force, her lance of light blazing with an intensity that would have been blinding if not for immediately being drawn into and numbed by the void.

The impact was cataclysmic, the grotto reverberating with the force of their clash. For a moment, time seemed to stand still, the two of them locked in a battle of wills. The darkness and light intertwined, their energies mingling and battling for supremacy.

As the clash reached its peak, Axl could feel the shadows within him straining, the tendrils of darkness wrapping tighter around his core. The lance in his hands trembled, the surface fraying and dissolving under the assault of the light. At the same time, Domi’s lance flickered and dimmed, the energy being siphoned away by the hungry void. But at that moment the forces gave way more in one direction than the other.

Each time their lances met, the light did more than just push back the darkness; it seemed to burn through it, reducing the inky blackness to a dripping, retreating ooze.

The shadows clung to the lance vainly, fighting against the overwhelming brightness. But the purity of Domi’s light was relentless, its touch like a scorching sunbeam against the night. Axl could see the darkness melting away, the lance’s once-solid form now fraying and dissolving under the assault. The darkness began to lose its coherence, dripping from the lance like black tar, its tendrils retreating into the grooves of the cobblestone floor.

The scene was both mesmerizing and disheartening. The lance, once a proud testament to his mastery over the shadows, now a retreating beast, its form reduced to a quivering mass of goo. The shadows abandoned their shape, the tendrils that had once clung to Axl’s hands slipping away, dissolving into formless puddles that seeped into the etched patterns of its stone refuge.

Axl’s grip tightened involuntarily as he felt the shadows withdrawing from him. The cold, comforting embrace of the darkness was replaced by a creeping sense of loss. It was as if a part of his very essence was being peeled away, the shadows that had once bolstered his strength now retreating, leaving behind an emptiness that gnawed at his core.

The sensations were overwhelming. The darkness, which had always been a source of empowerment and allure, now felt like a fleeting whisper, its touch slipping away like sand through his fingers. He could feel the shadows retreating, their presence dissipating into the air, leaving him exposed and vulnerable. The cold, liquid touch of the darkness, once a reassuring constant, now felt like a distant memory.

Domi’s lance continued to shine with unwavering intensity, its light filling the grotto with a brilliance that seemed almost alive. The shadows that had once thrived in the dim recesses were banished, their forms melting and dissolving under the relentless assault of her pure, unyielding light. Each strike from her lance sent more shadows retreating, the darkness melting away and seeping into oblivion, ink dripping from a canvas.

Axl felt a profound sense of loss as the shadows abandoned him. The cold, empowering presence of the darkness had been a part of him, a source of strength and identity. Now, as it melted away, he was left with a hollow sensation, the void within him expanding as the shadows retreated. The tactile sensation of the darkness slipping away was almost tangible, a physical representation of his diminishing power.

The grotto, once a sanctuary of shadows, was now bathed in the radiant glow of Domi’s light. The etched cobblestones seemed to shimmer, the residual darkness retreating into the crevices, leaving behind only the faintest traces of its existence. Axl’s lance, once a proud weapon of shadow, was now a formless pile of goo, its essence scattered and absorbed by the relentless light.

Axl took a step back, his breath coming in ragged gasps. The retreat of the shadows left him feeling exposed, the cold emptiness a stark contrast to the empowering presence he had once commanded. The sensation was both disorienting and humbling, a reminder of the delicate balance between light and dark, power and vulnerability.

As Domi lowered her lance, the light slowly receding, Axl stood in the center of the grotto, the echoes of their battle still reverberating in the air. The shadows, once a formidable force, had been reduced to a retreating memory, their essence reabsorbed into the ether. He collapsed, knees buckling and smashing into the stone ground below.

He looked at Domi, her face illuminated by the soft glow of her victory, and couldn't avoid falling in love all over again.

He inhaled, his lungs drowning in the shadows regrouping deep inside.


She had coyly turned away.


He winced and sucked in the cold, bloody air through gritted teeth, “leaving before round two, precious?”


Her lips curled and she darted her enamored and engaged eyes his way.
He always had the right words.



He mocked a kiss through the air between them and hopped straight up into a crouched position before laboring to an upright stance.



The shadows clung to the corners, hesitant to reclaim the space now bathed in the remnants of Domi's radiant light. He felt the cold, void-like sensation of his diminished power, the shadows having retreated, leaving him momentarily hollow. But within that emptiness, he sensed something new—a spark, a remnant of the light his lance had absorbed during their intense duel.

His breath steadied, and he closed his eyes, allowing himself to sink into the sensation of that captured light. It was a foreign presence within him, a warm, tingling energy that coursed through his veins, intermingling with the lingering tendrils of shadow. He focused on that warmth, drawing it inward, letting it fill the void left by the retreating darkness.

The light was a soothing balm, its presence a stark contrast to the cold embrace of the shadows. He could feel it pulsing through him, a radiant current that illuminated the pathways within his body. Each beat of his heart seemed to amplify its glow, sending waves of luminescence flowing through his veins. The sensation was exhilarating and empowering, a heady mix of foreign energy and newfound potential.

Axl concentrated on the light, envisioning it purifying itself as it flowed through him. The warmth spread from his core, radiating outward, each pulse cleansing and refining the energy. The light seemed to respond to his will, growing stronger and more vibrant with each passing moment. It was as if he was forging a new element within himself, a fusion of light and dark that transcended their individual natures.

He raised his hands, palms upward, and began to channel the purified light. The energy responded eagerly, converging at his fingertips in a swirl of radiant brilliance. The sensation was almost tactile, a warmth that tingled and vibrated as it gathered, coalescing into a concentrated form. He could feel the luminescence solidifying, its presence a blinding contrast to the shadows that had once dominated his being.

The grotto brightened in response, the light emanating from his hands casting long, stark shadows against the stone walls. The particles of light shimmered and danced, creating a mesmerizing display of pure, unfiltered energy. Axl could feel the power building, the warmth intensifying as the light began to take shape.

The process was both laborious and exhilarating, each moment a testament to his control and focus. He shaped the light with his mind, guiding it into a slender, elongated form. The lance began to materialize, its surface a blinding white that seemed to radiate purity and strength. The light was not just a reflection of Domi's power, but a new creation, forged from the remnants of their clash and the essence of his own will.

As the lance solidified, Axl marveled at its brilliance. It was a weapon of pure luminescence, its form defined by an intensity that seemed to pierce the very fabric of the grotto. The light hummed with energy, a resonant frequency that vibrated through his entire being. The warmth was intoxicating, a stark contrast to the cold touch of the shadows, and it filled him with a sense of invincibility and clarity.

He grasped the lance firmly, feeling the solidified light hum and pulse in his grip. The sensation was electrifying, the warmth spreading from his hands and coursing through his body like a river of liquid sunlight. The lance felt weightless yet substantial, a paradox that only heightened his awareness of the power he now wielded. Each movement of his fingers seemed to ripple through the weapon, the light responding with a fluid grace that made it seem almost alive.

Axl took a step forward, the lance of light moving with him, its blinding radiance casting away the shadows that lingered. The grotto, once a sanctuary of darkness, now basked in the glow of his creation. The etched cobblestones underfoot seemed to shimmer, reflecting the brilliance of the lance and amplifying its light.

He twirled the lance experimentally, feeling the air part around it with a gentle whoosh. The light trailed behind, creating arcs of luminescence that painted the grotto in dazzling patterns. The weapon, as before, was an extension of his will, responding to his every thought and motion with a grace and precision that left him awestruck.

The warmth continued to pulse through him, the light interwoven with his very essence. Axl felt a deep sense of satisfaction and fulfillment, the creation of the lance a testament to his ability to harness both light and dark. The energy of the light was empowering, a force that heightened his senses and sharpened his focus, leaving him feeling both invincible and serene.

As he stood in the center of the grotto, the lance of light illuminating the space around him, Axl knew that he had achieved something remarkable. He had taken the light absorbed from Domi's weapon and forged it into a new source of power, a testament to his mastery over the forces at his command. The sensation of the light coursing through him was intoxicating, a blend of warmth and purity that filled him with a profound sense of purpose and clarity.

The grotto, bathed in the radiant glow of his creation, seemed to hum with energy, the light and shadows intertwined in a delicate balance.

The air suffused with a palpable tension. The flickering torches cast an amber glow on the stone walls, but it was the resplendence of their weapons that truly bathed the chamber in light. Axl's lance of pure radiance blazed with an intensity that mirrored the fierce resolve in his eyes. Domi's weapon, equally effulgent, shone like a celestial beacon, dispelling the encroaching shadows with its brilliance.

With unspoken accord, they launched into their sparring session, their movements a fluid ballet of strength and agility, honed by countless hours of practice. Axl’s strikes were powerful and precise, each thrust and parry executed with controlled ferocity. His lance, an extension of his will, cut through the air with blinding speed. Domi matched his fervor, her weapon a harmonious blend of grace and power. Their lances collided, the incandescent light scattering in dazzling arcs, painting the grotto in radiant hues.

The darkness, ever-present at Axl’s back, lingered in the peripheries, both hiding from the fierce light and bolstering his form. It anchored his body, the shadows coiling around his legs and torso, providing stability and agility as he pivoted and struck. The contrast was stark: the radiant light of their weapons and the lurking, watchful shadows, a testament to the equilibrium they sought to maintain.

Axl could feel the darkness at his back, a comforting, cold presence that amplified his senses and sharpened his focus. It was an integral part of him, a silent partner in this intricate dance of combat. The shadows whispered to him, their tendrils curling around his limbs, enabling him to move with a fluid grace that transcended the constraints of his physical form.

Their weapons were not mere constructs; they were extensions of their very essences. Each clash was a confluence of their souls, a testament to their connection and the formidable power they wielded. The light from their lances intertwined, creating a radiant tapestry that shimmered with the intensity of their emotions.

Domi’s strikes were swift and precise, her lance a blur of luminescence as it met Axl’s with a resonant clash. The energy of their weapons created a tangible pulse, a resonance that vibrated through the air and sent ripples of light cascading through the grotto. Axl responded with equal ardor, his movements a blend of calculated precision and raw power. He felt the shadows guiding him, their presence a steadying force that allowed him to pivot and strike with unparalleled speed.

The sensual intimacy of their sparring was undeniable. Each clash of their lances was a confluence of their souls, a reflection of their connection and the formidable power they wielded. Axl could feel the warmth of the light coursing through him, intermingling with the cold tendrils of darkness that clung to his form. It was a heady, exhilarating sensation, a fusion of opposites that left him feeling both empowered and grounded.

Domi’s eyes locked with his, a spark of challenge and affection in their depths. She moved with a grace that was almost ethereal, her body a conduit for the radiant energy she wielded. The light of her lance seemed to flow through her, illuminating her form and casting a soft glow on her features. Axl felt a surge of admiration and respect, his connection to her deepening with each clash of their weapons.

The courtyard pulse with their energy, the light and shadows creating a dynamic interplay that was both mesmerizing and intense. Axl could feel the darkness at his back, its presence a steadying force that anchored him in the midst of their whirlwind combat. The shadows coiled and twisted, their touch a cold, comforting embrace that heightened his awareness and sharpened his reflexes.

Their movements became more intricate, their lances weaving a complex pattern of light that filled the grotto with a radiant glow. Axl could feel the warmth of the light intermingling with the cold of the shadows, creating a perfect balance that resonated through his entire being. The sensation was intoxicating, a blend of empowerment and intimacy that left him breathless.

Domi’s lance struck with a blinding flash, the impact sending a shower of sparks cascading around them. Axl pivoted, the shadows anchoring his body as he countered with a swift thrust. Their weapons met with a resounding clash, the light intertwining and creating a dazzling display of radiant energy. The grotto seemed to come alive with their power, the light and shadows dancing in a mesmerizing symphony.

For as long as they locked weapons, their eyes followed suit. They dove into one another voraciously, their constructs clanging against stone and retreating from existence as the pair retreated into one another with unbridled passion.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Fri May 31, 2024 10:50 pm

Sense Force User
More than 400, less than 1900
Axl, Age 11

Nar Shaddaa. The Vertical City.

Axl navigated the intricate streets of the dense city, each step echoing softly against the slabs and scaffolding of the ground beneath him. The metropolis around him thrummed with life, an overwhelming symphony of auditory and olfactory input blending into a cacophony of existence. People crowded the narrow pathways, their voices merging into a low hum of chatter and commerce. Vendors shouted their wares, children laughed and played, and the occasional cry of an auctioneer pierced the din. Despite the chaos, Axl's focus remained inward, his senses attuned to the currents of the Force that flowed around him.

The Force was a vast, intricate web, each thread a life pulsating with its own unique energy. Axl closed his eyes for a moment, letting the sensations wash over him. He could feel the myriad presences around him, each one distinct yet interconnected. The urgency of a merchant haggling with a customer, the quiet desperation of a beggar in a nearby alley, the simmering anger of a worker heading home after a long shift—all these lives brushed against his awareness, fleeting yet vivid.

To find his mother, Vasilisa, in this sea of sentient disharmony, Axl needed to delve deeper, to filter through the noise and hone in on the one presence that mattered most. He took a deep breath, drawing the cool air into his lungs and exhaling slowly, allowing his mind to settle into a state of focused clarity. His mother’s essence was unique, a beacon of strength and serenity amidst the turmoil. Her sharp, sleek, rigid aura, shaped by her Nagai features and her rigorous training as an Imperial Inquisitor, stood out with unmistakable clarity.

Axl reached out with the Force, extending his senses like tendrils into the surrounding environment. The sensations were immediate and overwhelming, a deluge of emotions and thoughts that threatened to drown his consciousness. He could feel the light, fleeting touches of joy and sorrow, anger and fear, hope and despair. Each presence was a distinct note in the symphony of the city, contributing to the complex tapestry of life.

He sifted through these sensations with practiced ease, allowing the Force to guide him. It was a delicate process, akin to tuning a finely crafted instrument. He focused on the rhythm of his own heartbeat, using it as an anchor to steady his mind. Gradually, the chaotic swirl of emotions began to resolve into clearer patterns. He could sense the individual threads of life around him, each one distinct and separate from the others.

Vasilisa’s presence was a singular melody amidst the multitude, a steady pulse of energy that resonated with his own. Axl could feel the familiar blend of strength and calm that defined her, a harmonious balance of light and shadow. Her aura was a complex interplay of contrasts, shaped by her past as an Inquisitor and her determination to forge a new path. It was this duality that made her essence stand out, a beacon of clarity in the dense fog of the city.

As he moved through the crowded streets, Axl allowed himself to be guided by this thread of energy. He walked with purpose, his steps unerring as he followed the invisible path that connected him to his mother. The sensations around him were intense, each presence a brief, vivid touch in the Force. He felt the weary sigh of an old woman sitting by her stall, the playful shouts of children chasing each other down the street, the focused determination of a street performer preparing for his act. Each presence was acknowledged and then set aside, a part of the background noise as he honed in on his mother’s essence.

The connection between them was like a lifeline, a steady pulse of energy that grew stronger as he drew closer. Axl could feel the warmth of her aura, a flickering flame that stood out against the cold, chaotic energies surrounding him. It was a subtle pulse, a rhythm that resonated with his own, guiding him through the labyrinthine streets and alleys.

His mother’s presence became more defined with each step, a tangible force that cut through the ambient noise of the city. Axl opened his eyes, scanning the crowd with renewed clarity. He could see, in his mind's eye, the faint outline of her aura sticking out in a general direction, a shimmering glow that set her apart from the faceless masses. It was a subtle but unmistakable sign, guiding him through the throng of people.

He turned down a narrow alley, the noise of the main street fading behind him. The air was cooler here, the shadows deeper and more pronounced. Axl’s steps quickened, the pull of his mother’s presence drawing him onward.

But then something shifted. His connection turned stagnant. He could no longer parse out her aura, as he emerged from the alleyway into a clearing, a major bustling parish of vice and commerce.

Her essence had been a guiding light amidst the mosaic of life around him, but now it seemed to flicker and fade, slipping away like water through his fingers. He paused, taking a deep breath to steady himself, closing his eyes to block out the distractions and focus inward.

The city was alive with the vibrant energies of its inhabitants, each presence a distinct thread in the intricate tapestry of the Force. Axl could feel the chaotic swirl of emotions and thoughts, a tumultuous sea of sensations that shorted out his concentration.

Axl clenched his fists, frustration gnawing at the edges of his focus. He had to find her, to reestablish the connection that had guided him through the bustling avenues. The sensations were immediate and intense, a deluge of emotions and thoughts that threatened to drown his consciousness. He could feel the light, fleeting touches of joy and sorrow, anger and fear, hope and despair. Each presence was a momentary blip on his radar, acknowledged and then set aside as he struggled to hone in on his mother’s essence.

The bustling streets were filled with a diverse array of beings, each contributing to the chaotic energy that pulsed through the city. Aliens of various species moved through the markets, their unique signatures adding to the complexity of the Force. Bounty hunters lurked in the shadows, their predatory auras a sharp contrast to the more benign presences around them. A group of retired veteran clone troopers stood outside a saloon, their loud, drunken argument adding to the racket that filled the air.

Axl doubled his efforts, sifting through the myriad sensations with renewed determination. He focused on the rhythm of his own heartbeat, using it as an anchor to steady his mind. Gradually, the chaotic swirl of emotions began to resolve into clearer patterns. He could sense the individual threads of life around him, each one distinct and separate from the others. He had to once again parse out his mother’s presence from this overwhelming tide.

His frustration mounted as he continued to search, his connection to the Force wavering under the strain. The argument of the clone troopers was a constant, grating noise in the background, their heated words a distraction that he struggled to ignore. The fact that their faces were nearly identical, unnerving doppelgangers of his own father certainly didn't help. Part of him felt a bond to the former soldiers, another felt their mere existence was an unforgivable insult. He could feel the dark side of the Force tugging at him, urging him to give in to his anger and frustration. But he resisted, reminding himself that he needed to remain focused and calm to find his target.

Despite this Axl quickened his pace.

He clenched his eyes and recalled a lullaby she once sang to Erailic, as Axl sat by their doorway and his Father provided snores as punctuated percussion. The notes danced in his mind and swirled around him, spreading further outward in search of a resonating frequency, for the soul who had written them. Having been abducted at such a young age, Vasilisa did not remember much of her actual family, and typical maternal instincts came hard to her and were heavily improvised. The song she had sung her children was uniquely hers, and in this moment was a grounding influence for Axl as he purged all other influence and stimulus from his mind.

There it was. He could feel the bond between them, a connection that transcended distance and time, anchored in the deep understanding they shared.

There, at the end of the alley, he saw her. Vasilisa stood with her back to him, her pale skin almost luminescent in the dim light. Her dark hair fell in a cascade of waves, partially obscuring the pointed tips of her Nagai ears. She was speaking with a vendor, her posture relaxed yet alert, a testament to her years of training.

Axl approached quietly, not wanting to interrupt. He watched her for a moment, marveling at the ease with which she navigated this world. She was a study in contrasts—her past as an Inquisitor a shadow that had shaped her; how could a crucible so relentless not? She had found a way to use the dark side of the Force without succumbing to its corrupting influence, a delicate balance that few could achieve.

As he drew nearer, Vasilisa turned, her eyes meeting his. There was a moment of recognition, her presence in the Force flaring with a muted but ever present affection. She smiled, a genuine expression that softened her otherwise stern features.

"Axl," she greeted, her voice a calm, steady presence that soothed his mind.

He beamed back, feeling the tension of the search melt away, “can't get rid of me that easily."

They stood together in the neon washed glow of an oversized produce stand, the city’s noise a distant hum. Axl felt the shadows at his back, a comforting reminder of the power they wielded. The darkness was a part of them, a tool they had learned to master and control. It enhanced their abilities, allowing them to navigate the complexities of life with a clarity and precision that stood ready to serve as either tool or weapon at a moment's necessity.

The Force was a constant companion, guiding him through the chaos of the vertical city. The connection he shared with his mother was a testament to their bond, a reflection of the strength and understanding they had cultivated together. The darkness was not something to be feared, but a source of power that, when harnessed correctly, could be a formidable ally.

The ebb and flow of the crowd naturally accommodated them as they moved, Vasilisa’s presence a calming force that seemed to ripple through the living waters. Axl remained attuned to the subtle nuances of the Force, the myriad sensations that defined the lives of those around them. The interplay of emotions and thoughts was a rich tapestry, each thread contributing to the intricate web of the city.

Axl marveled at his mother’s poise and control, the way she seemed to blend seamlessly into her surroundings while remaining distinctly herself. Her aura was a beacon, a steady light in the midst of chaos. He could feel the echoes of her past, the rigorous training and discipline that had shaped her, tempered by the warmth and compassion she had discovered within herself. He had no doubt that similarly his experiences would continue to carve him as hers had.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Sun Jun 16, 2024 7:44 am

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Axl, age 7


Axl stood tense in the dimly lit training chamber, his small frame quivering with anticipation. The stone walls loomed around him, the flickering light casting elongated shadows that danced with an almost mocking grace. He drew a deep breath, trying to steady his pounding heart.


"Steel your mind," Vasilisa's voice sliced through the still air, cold and commanding. "Weakness is death. Fortify."


Axl nodded, his jaw set in determination. The dark side’s tendrils coiled around him, familiar and cold. He had been taught to wield this power as a tool, a weapon, never allowing it to consume him. Today’s lesson, however, was about defense—shielding his mind from the insidious reach of others.


"Ready?" Her tone left no room for hesitation.


Though anxiety gnawed at his insides he mustered the wherewithal, “yes, moth–”


"Begin."


Axl closed his eyes, conjuring the image of an impenetrable fortress. He envisioned walls of solid stone, towering and unyielding. The rough texture of the imaginary bricks felt almost tangible under his fingers. He poured his will into these defenses, building them stronger with each heartbeat. The paste seeping out between each block was a mental manifestation for the darkness inside of him– the only tool he had been given, as it had been the only one gifted to both of his parents. It had ensured their survival, and thus been his inheritance, their legacy.


Pain lanced through his mind, shattering his concentration. It was her. Her mind was intersected with his own, he felt her probing, prowling like the apex predator she was. Axl gasped, eyes snapping open to meet his mother’s unyielding gaze.


"Again."


He clenched his fists, closing his eyes once more. The fortress reformed in his mind, stone by stone. Tendrils of the dark side wrapped around him, reassuring their young disciple. He could do this. He must.


The intrusion returned, sharper, more invasive. Axl cried out, clutching his head as his mother’s will pressed into his thoughts, relentless and overpowering. Shards pressed deeper into the most private nooks of his mind.


"Stop me," she ordered, her tone glacial.


Axl pushed back, but she was a tidal wave and he was holding up the seawall with his bare hands. His physical hand rose against his will, fingers curling into a fist. He fought to regain control, but his hand struck his cheek with a dense thud. Tears sprang to his eyes from the sting.


"Never again!" he shouted, the words torn from his throat. "I won’t—"


His defiance was hollow. His now open palm moved again, slapping harder. His cheek burned, skin reddening under the impact. Axl’s vision blurred with tears of pain and frustration. The dark side mocked his efforts, whispering of his inadequacy. Or was it his mother's voice? Or a searing persona deep in the recesses of his core?


"Fortify," Vasilisa’s voice cut through the agony, a lifeline of iron. "Weakness invites death."


Axl’s breaths came in ragged gasps. He closed his eyes, desperate to reclaim his crumbling mental fortress. The stone walls buckled, disintegrating under the relentless assault. He focused, pouring his will into reconstituting them, reinforcing every stone with sheer determination.


His hand struck again, harder. Blood trickled from a cut on his lip, the iron tang filling his mouth. Axl sobbed, his small body trembling with the effort of resistance.


"Please," he whispered, barely audible. "I can’t—"


"Can’t is death," Vasilisa’s voice was ice. "You must."


Axl’s mind was a battlefield, his thoughts a chaotic jumble of pain and fear. The dark side beckoned, offering power, offering release. He had to find strength within, to build the tower that would lift him into the sky, beyond invading forces.


He took a deep breath, calming his racing heart. He imagined the walls again, thicker and stronger. He poured his will into them, drawing on every scrap of resolve. The dark side’s tendrils wrapped tighter, loaning their sturdy heft.


The intrusion came again, searing. Axl gritted his teeth, his hands clenching into fists. He would not let her in. He felt the pressure building, the force trying to break through his defenses. But this time, the walls held for a moment, trembling but intact.


"Better," Vasilisa’s tone was a frigid approval. "Hold."


Axl’s muscles seized, sweat cascading from each pore, pooling along his brow. He could still feel his mother’s presence, but it laid in wait just outside of his real world senses. He had pushed her back, for now.


"Again," she snapped. "No hesitation."


Axl nodded, preparing himself as best he could for the next assault. He closed his eyes, focus on the fortress once more. He felt his mother’s presence gathering strength, preparing to strike, a scorpion's tail calculating its next engagement. The dark side’s tendrils tightened their grip, bracing for impact.


The intrusion struck, a needle through his thoughts. Axl gasped, focusing on the walls, on keeping them intact. He would not let her in. The pressure built, a force trying to shatter his defenses. His hand twitched, fighting for control. The walls trembled, but they held. Axl’s body shook, the cumulated sweat flowing down his cheek.


He would not let her in.


Vasilisa's relentless assault bore down on him, a storm of psychic force. Axl felt every inch of his being straining against her will. The pain was a serrated knife, slicing through his thoughts, threatening to unravel the mental fortress he had constructed. But he clung to it, each stone a testament to his determination.


His hand trembled, a puppet on invisible strings, but it did not strike. The walls of his mind held firm, quivering under the onslaught but standing resolute. The dark side swirled around him in triumph, an icy wind that both chilled and strengthened. He drew on its power, using it to fill the cracks, to keep the walls standing.


"Stronger," Vasilisa's voice was a glacier grinding inexorably forward. "This is survival."


Axl's breath came only in labored gasps. His body ached, his mind felt frayed at the edges, but he did not falter. He felt the chilled tendrils of his training tightening around him, a lifeline in the storm. He harnessed that energy, channeled it into his defenses. The fortress in his mind grew more solid, more real.



The next wave of her assault hit, a hammer blow that reverberated through his skull. Axl's knees buckled, but for the moment he did not fall. He pushed back, his will a counterforce against her intrusion. He could feel her presence probing, seeking weakness, but he held firm.



His mother’s face was a mask of stern resolve. There was no softness in her gaze, only the cold appraisal of a teacher, a warrior. She pressed harder, her will an iron vise around his mind. Axl felt his control slipping, the walls beginning to crumble.


"No weakness," her tone was a cracking whip. "Endure."


Axl bit back a cry of pain. He pictured each stone in rapid succession, each layer of defense. He poured his will into each fissure, fortifying them to his limits. The dark tendrils coiled tighter, their cold touch a paradoxical comfort.


The assault intensified. Axl’s vision blurred with tears, his body shook with the effort of resistance. He felt his hand twitching, the compulsion to strike himself surging through him. But he fought it, teeth clenched, every muscle tensed. He would not let her in.


The pain was excruciating, a white-hot lance through his mind. Axl screamed, but he did not surrender.


The walls held. Barely.


"Enough," Vasilisa’s voice was a sudden release, the pressure lifting. She stepped back, her expression inscrutable. "You resist. Yet it is not enough."


Axl collapsed to his knees, gasping for breath. His body ached, his mind felt like it had been through a grinder. Blood dripped from his lip, mixing with sweat and tears. But he had held her back, if only just.


"Again," she commanded, her voice allowing no reprieve.


Axl’s heart sank, but he nodded. He climbed to his feet, his legs trembling. He closed his eyes, summoning the image of the fortress once more. The walls were battered, cracked, but he patched them more rapidly than before.


He felt his mother’s presence building again, a dark cloud on the horizon. He steeled himself, focusing on his defenses. The assault came, a tidal wave crashing against his mind. He would not let her in.


The pressure was immense, a force of nature bearing down on him. Axl could feel his hand twitching, the compulsion to strike himself growing stronger. He focused on the walls, on making them impenetrable. He visualized the mortar, filling in the gaps. The dark tendrils twisted into a gnarled mass at his back.


"Resist."


His body and mind were weaving themselves back together, braiding as scar tissue stronger than the sum of their parts.


She was a shiv pressing, vibrating his skull. Axl did not surrender.


The walls yet held.


He had, in fact, not let her in.


“Adequate.”

She pivoted and was just as quickly gone, slinking through the shadows.

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Re: A Fragile Shard of a Dying Past

Post by Darth Fett » Sun Jun 30, 2024 10:09 pm

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In the dim half-light of the market’s back alley, Axl's eyes flickered beneath furrowed brows, piercing through the murk as if they alone could kindle light where none dared persist. His young mind, ever restless, sought not just the ordinary—a mere play of shadows and whispers—but the veiled truths that danced on the tongues of those he encountered.

He had learned and practiced this "parlor trick" over the dinner table with his parents, taking turns attempting to tell the most outlandish lies they could without being caught by the others.

A vendor, a grizzled man with a hawkish nose and hands gnarled like the roots of an ancient tree, claimed his wares were the finest in the sector. "Pure Bespin silk," he crooned, his voice a practiced melody of honesty and allure. But Axl, standing small and unassuming before the stall, reached out with tendrils of perception not through his physical being but through the Force—a sixth sense awakened and attuned to the subtle shifts of reality that escaped the naked eye.

He concentrated, his gaze unblinking, as the Force whispered to him in a language older than words. It was like sensing the color of the wind or hearing the scent of the twilight; a supernatural extension of his very essence that spilled into the world around him. The man's aura flickered, a candle struggling against a silent storm. Axl's heart quickened as strands of deceit unwound within the luminescent glow of the Force, revealing the tangled web of half-truths and embellishments.

"No, this isn't Bespin silk," Axl said quietly, his voice steady and more mature than his years suggested. "It’s from Lothal, treated to feel softer."

The vendor's eyes widened, taken aback by the assertive clarity of a mere child. He stuttered, a clumsy dance of denial and admission on his lips, but Axl was no longer listening with his ears. He felt the shift, the subtle break in the vendor's spirit as the truth echoed clearly through the silent music of the Force. The man conceded, a gruff chuckle masking his embarrassment. "Sharp one, aren't you, boy?"

Axl nodded, not in arrogance but in acknowledgment of the truth now laid bare between them. He moved on, his small figure weaving through the crowd, each step guided by an unseen force that drew him to another, a woman cloaked in the dull grays of a traveler.

She stood apart, her stance a careful composition of weariness and alertness as she offered up her own goods: supposed relics from the ancient Sith homeworld of Korriban. Her tale was rich, imbued with the mystique of dark legends and the allure of forbidden knowledge. She mentioned a Sith High Priestess of legend, a Lady Daragon.

Axl approached, his presence barely registering in her wary periphery. Once more, he reached out with the Force, tendrils of his consciousness brushing against hers in a dance as delicate as it was profound. Her story unfurled in whispers around her, each word a brushstroke on the canvas of her aura. The Force pulsed, a gentle wave washing over sands strewn with the shards of possible falsehood.

They weren't from Korriban, he determined touching a supposed artifact lightly with his fingertips. The object, though ancient, sang a different song in the choir of the cosmos, its origins lying elsewhere, its essence untouched by the dark energies it was claimed to possess.

The woman met his gaze, her eyes narrowing not in anger but in stubborn fear and muted desperation. Neither of them spoke what she suspected he had gleaned.

As Axl walked away, his mind thrummed with the vibrant chords of reality discerned and mysteries unveiled. Each encounter was a lesson, a step deeper into the vast ocean of the Force, where every ripple and wave was a story, every current a hidden truth. He was learning to navigate this ethereal sea, to understand its ebbs and flows as naturally as he breathed.

In the simmering cauldron of the market’s underbelly, where the clatter of dice and the rasp of shuffled cards embroidered the air with a tapestry of temptation, young Axl stood as an island of calm amidst the roiling sea of deceit. His gaze, sharp as a scimitar’s edge, cut through the haze of smoke and half-truths, settling upon a hunched figure ensconced at a battered card table.

The card player, a wiry man with a fox's grin and eyes that danced like flame flickers, was a maestro of the bluff. His hands, quick and smooth, were adept at weaving illusions with the cards, his laughter a cloak that masked the stiletto of deceit sheathed up his sleeve.

Axl, drawn not by the pull of the game but by the currents of the Force that flowed around and through the players, tuned out the peripheral noise. He focused on the essence of the moment—the man's aura that shimmered with the colors of duplicity. To the untrained eye, nothing was amiss, but Axl saw with eyes unclouded by the mundane.

The Force whispered to him, a soft susurrus in the back of his mind, threads of energy that Axl reached out to grasp with a mental touch as delicate as a weaver’s fingers on the loom. The truth was a delicate filament among these threads, vibrating at a frequency that spoke of hidden things. Axl honed in on the card player, feeling the pulse of his intentions, the slight tremor of excitement mingled with the cold spike of fear that accompanied deceit.

With the gentle nudge of his consciousness, Axl brushed against the card concealed within the player’s sleeve—a "minus 2" card, its presence a discordant note in the symphony of the man’s projected confidence. The card was cradled in the shadows, ensconced in the fabric as if it were a precious gem hidden in the folds of the earth. It was not seen, but felt, an anomaly in the flow of energies, a pebble in the stream altering the current’s path.

Axl's perception deepened, the Force amplifying his senses until he could almost see the fibers of the man’s sleeve, feel the slight bulge of the card against the cloth. It was as if he stood at the nexus of a web, each vibration a message carried up the silken threads, every twitch and subtle shift a testament to the concealed truth.

He did not need to see the card physically; he perceived its essence, felt its presence as surely as if he had held it in his own hands. Moreover the cheater's mind shouted it over and over. The card’s aura was tinged with the residue of the man’s greedy anticipation, the sly delight of a secret advantage held close. This resonance did not blend with the rest of the gambler’s demeanor—it stood apart, a whisper of shadow against the light of his feigned joviality.

The players around the table were oblivious, caught up in the dance of chance and skill, their minds focused on the cards laid bare. They did not notice the quiet boy who stood apart, nor did they sense the subtle flows of truth and deception that he navigated with the instincts of a navigator charting a course through starlit seas.

Axl remained still, a sentinel bearing witness to the revelation of truth within the shadows. The knowledge filled him not with triumph, but with a sober understanding of the power he wielded—a power to see beyond the veils that others drew around their deeds.

The market’s din swirled around him, a storm of sounds and motions, but within Axl, there was a deep, resonant quiet—a sanctum of truth in the heart of chaos, where the Force whispered secrets for only the most attuned to hear.

The market faded behind him, a tapestry of lives and lies, truths and half-truths, all woven into the broader fabric of existence. Axl carried with him the silent knowledge that with the Force as his guide, the truth was never beyond reach, always whispering, waiting to be understood in the depths of his expanding, supernatural sense.

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